Chapter Three
🕑 Added 2018-01-25 19:31:20 +0000 UTC
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Sounds like you got your priorities in order :)
I unsubed all my other patreons to pledge for this
Jackson's diaper was bone dry in chapter 2. Hopefully Brook's notices that he's still dry and makes him wet it. Then Jackson will need a diaper change as well.
heha, cute. Can't wait to read more. ^^
It seems like everything in this chapter is so much more polished, visually. It's honestly magical. Keep this up, I am so excited for the future of this :D :D :D
Hammy Dwagon
omg yes, loved it, the writing, the illustrations! ugh so good
Insignia
I absolutely LOVE this page! Awesome story writing and awesome art! This comic is absolutely amazing in general!
Great work on another awesome chapter! Having a cover page was a great addition. It sets up the scene well and it’s nice to see a full page illustration first thing. It gives you an idea of what’s going on and you can take as much or as little time as you want taking it in, analyzing it, and surmising what sort of plot it’s setting up. Then when you wanna know what’s happening and what it leads to, you move on to the story portion. I love how even Jack’s tail is wrapped around Brooks. He’s literally hugging and embracing him as much as he possibly can lol