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Style Test (Possible Page 1)

🕑 Added 2019-03-07 03:00:50 +0000 UTC
Style Test (Possible Page 1)

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Volpethrope

I like the perspective cut on the first panel. I've seen you do that before and it's a neat effect. The main thing I would advise for trying comics though would be to fill out your backgrounds more. You want to show a *scene*, not just two people saying things at each other. I've seen comic pages that were literally just panels of characters heads, going back and forth between them with minor expression changes as they talked. That's functionally the same thing as a text log. I recommend giving TwoKinds' recent chapters a look for constructing page layouts. The DreamKeepers stuff is also really good. Maybe even message the creators of either for tips!


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