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TIER 2+: 5YL:R Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2023-02-18 01:37:13 +0000 UTC
TIER 2+: 5YL:R Chapter 5

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Diesel of Alrest

Looks pretty good. You kinda misspelled "Petrosapien" during Diamondhead's introduction though. And there's repeating dialogue in Page 19, and in Page 30, why is Ben saying the line "Roger that, all you Ben"?

Alec

Looks good but there are duplicate speech boxes on top of page 19 just to let you know

Liam Animates

Looks awesome!


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