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SS PART II (storyboard)
🕑 Added 2025-07-13 18:24:32 +0000 UTCIn short, "Part 2" was divided into... 2 parts (sorry for the tautology :0). And I had to redo a lot of things in the storyboard in Part 2 and 3 (since I got a lot of feedback after Part 1), but there will be sex in both of them
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SeñorBarbar
I love it and I am excited for it!!
Felix Kosh
"Also that sense of regret from both of them on the last page.": Of course, nothing is clear without the text, but this is not yet a sense of regret. Nelson stands covered with his T-shirt, not understanding what is happening again, because 10 minutes ago, Naomi seduced him and had sex with him, and now says that "Thank you, I got what I wanted (and she wanted to get pregnant, but Nelson does not know this), but it will not happen again and please get dressed, I would not like to see you naked again." Nelson, tired of figuring out why Naomi behaves this way, goes to smoke weed on the roof. Naomi goes to the kitchen to make coffee, but the milk runs out and she asks Marco (her husband and Nelson's father) to stop by the store, Marco agrees. Naomi asks him about the interview, but gets only silence (Which suggests that he did not get the job ...) :)
Anubislaughed
I like the "Little Angel vs. Devil on her shoulder" bit. Shows that she's got some depth and thinking about what she's about to do. Also that sense of regret from them both on the last page.
