CrossdressinginCamelot
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New Art! New Artist!
🕑 Added 2024-01-19 10:06:51 +0000 UTCNSFW ARTWORK BELOW!
I've patched in another new CG for the game in the bonus download folder I posted last time, this time it's for the scene with Cassandra in the fifth dungeon, where Angelica has gotten her stuck through a wall, with only her ass on display. (And a picture of her face.) If you download the patch you can view the scene now, and if you've finished the fifth dungeon you can also access it from the scene reviewer.
This CG set is from a new artist, so I also wanted to do a poll to see how you all feel about their art. There are quite a few variations for the scene, so to simplify things I'm only posting three of them below. If you want to see the artwork in game first, don't click show more!
Edit: Patreon seems to resize images that you add into the body of a post, so I'm also attaching the images in the resolution you'll view them in-game.
As for the poll itself, simply rate the artwork above from 1-5. If you have any specific feedback, feel free to comment that. Thank you!
Comments
StickyIcky
That's the plan at the moment. Fix up the face (as it seems that's where most of the issues are) and setting up a second poll. I'll probably post the images separately for that, as if I do an "Image" post then I can actually put in larger files. I just can't have full size images and a poll together, for some reason.
laura smith
I think it might be a good idea to get the artist to try and fix up all the problems that are rather obvious(if they can that is) and host a new poll with the fixed artwork
StickyIcky
There's definitely issues with the face proportions, so I'm going to ask the artist to fix that up a bit. I think there the main issue is that it's quite long. The forehead could be shrunk, and the gap between the mouth and nose should probably be smaller. And the eyes, mouth and nose could be a bigger. A more detailed nose might help as well, as currently it's very slight. For the shading, is there anything in particular you dislike, or do you just find it bad in general? And is that for the shading on the face, or the shading overall? As for the vertical pink bar, I believe you're referring to what is supposed to be a sticker covering her vagina. You could search "maebari' on rule34 or something for more examples. And assuming the spots you are referring to are the white ones, those are white lipstick marks from Angelica teasing Cassandra. This might just be me trying to interpret your feedback optimistically, but it sounds like part of the problem is just the tiny resolution Patreon has forced on me here, because I quite like how both the vagina sticker and the lipstick marks look, but they become a bit small and hard to make out with the smaller image size. The only way I can seem to have it be the full size aside from attaching a download link would be to make an image post above the poll. Maybe I'll do that when I post the art with some touch ups. Thank you for your feedback!
Myriad
I absolutely abhor saying something is bad without the "why" or what to do about it. I still suck at point number 2, but I think the real problem is the face proportions and shading. I also don't know what is going on in the crotch; that vertical pink bar grabs your attention, then you wonder what disease made the spots on the sack.
