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The Plumber - Part 2

🕑 Added 2024-10-18 08:25:27 +0000 UTC

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Mitchinator9339

Hmm, good story, but I feel the need to give a little bit of constructive criticism here. I feel like the fact Elliot wanted Mike needed to be established a little more in the first chapter, because to me the switch came out of nowhere. Maybe if Elliot was a little more nervous or blushed more around mike a little earlier on, especially when he was seemingly interrupted, or if Mike found something to suspect that Elliot liked that sort of thing in his bedroom or bathroom when he entered, or even if Elliot started to act more gay and in awe when Mike was bent over fixing the toilet or when he was pissing. Stuff like that probably would have gone a long way to set the scene and make him seem more than just a spoilt teen brat, I think. Still a hot read tho 😝

Joseph Thomas

Love it! Mike certainly wasn’t expecting this ending to his day. Lol.

Jon

Great job. Love this story. Looking forward to more!!

Mit Seiler

Great story!

W

This is one way to make up for your bratty behavior in part one, Elliot. Perhaps the best way.

Orsino

This carried me away. 🤤🤤🤤


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