My Yellow Hat
🕑 Added 2024-05-28 00:36:39 +0000 UTCThis is based on an old folk song from the 1600's. There's been a lot of versions over the years. If you're of a certain age you'll probably remember it being included in one of the Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark books. I made my version gay because why not. The original ballad goes like this:
It's of a farmer in our town,
His election goes the country round;
He had a daughter, a beauty bright,
In every place was her heart's delight.
Many a young man a-courting came,
But none of them would her favour gain,
Till a young man came, of low degree,
Came underhanded and she fancied he.
Soon as her father came this to hear,
He separated her from her dear,
For four score miles this maid was sent,
To her uncle's home for his discontent.
Nine days after this young man died,
And his ghost appeared at her bedside -
"Rise, rise, my love and come with me,
And break these chains and set me free."
This maid arose and got up behind,
And he drove as swift as the very wind,
And not a word did this young man speak,
But - "My dearest dear, how my head does ache!"
She had a handkerchief of the holland kind,
And around his head she did him bind;
She kissed his pale lips, and thus did say -
"My dearest dear, you're as cold as clay."
He drove her up to her father's door,
And saw her father standing on the floor -
"O father dear, did you send for me
By such a kind messenger, kind sir?" said she.
He wrung his hands and tore his hair,
Much like a man in deep despair;
He tore the hair all from his head,
Crying - "Daughter dear, the young man is dead."
Early next morning this maid arose,
And straightaway to the churchyard goes,
She rose the corpse that was nine day's dead,
And found her handkerchief bound round his head.
O parents, parents, a warning take,
Don't chide your children, for heaven's sake!
Don't chide your children, for heaven's sake,
Or you'll repent when it is too late.
Comments
Anya Rose Hueing
Beautiful take on the rhyme!
TribalSam
Once they were on the bike it dawned on me that this was “Cold as Clay”
Markus Sjöholm
This was a beautiful story, both visually and drama. Since it's such an old story told by many, I'm going to try to use it in my first attempt to draw a comic. I draw traditional, and it's going to be for my blog on Tumblr. I'm giving cred to you in it. How lucky I found you! I love your style. I'm still pretty much a newbie, so I have it easier drawing semirealistic than more stylized comic. I need a hobby project of this size to find a style that comes naturally to me. Since I loved this comic it's going to be easier to keep the motivation up when it drags out in time. I took a free membership now to night, but I'm buying a tier on Monday.
Psyc Melone
In the Ben Wyatt voice too 😂
Ol' Monster-Face
You can find a beautiful recording of the song here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlMi3jvktUg
Ol' Monster-Face
The version I'm most familiar with is "The Holland Handkerchief". I love how subtly familiar the story is in contrast to the setting!
Victor
This got to be one of my fav. And also I honestly know a dad like Ravi's dad..
Green
I love so much about this comic but I'm sorry I just cannot stop hearing "Calizona" as anything other than "calzone-a" in a heavy Italian accent
Clare Seashell
This makes me rethink all the chiding i do to my children.
Kalhara Caldera
Sad, but very nicely done!
Arslana
Yes!! That too makes sense in the era in which the comic is set! It’s really not that far fetched…
Arslana
New commonwealth of Calizona and the beautiful way in which futurism was rendered… with corn, the led cross (we already have that in some places!), the whole landscape, the indication tables,… it’s sooooo well made!!! The details are incredible!
Sabina Moe
thanks i cried
Michael Wood
Incredible! Love this one.
M
Ok but the fact that Jen dies in 2069 - nice
Sarah
I'm always awed by the detail in your illustrations.
Rebekah Burnette
You are literally so incredible at these retellings😍😍😍
Entropy
This gave me feelings
Cerrasponda
I think this is my new favorite.
spicyykels
GODDDD this is so good
Sarah Blume-Kelly
Oooh, thank you so much!
Sarah Pascall
It's another one of his stories
Sarah Blume-Kelly
Is the corn a reference to something or just super weird?
Amelia Ross
I've reread this like ten times
Kyle Michel Sullivan
Such an elegant telling of the tale...so beautifully done.
Vixie
Wow, this is so heartbreaking but also, good for him (arson).
Malcolm Massey
I also read 3 years as well smh🤦♂️
Cristina Cumbreño
Question: I’ve been subscribed for over a month on the $5 tier, do you know how I can get the phone background?
Jordan Chaffiotte
The way I was triggered by the corn and was screaming the corn is people!!!
Sadie Friedman
It's probably not even important but the "you belong to me until you're 25" sticks. Just an actual legal progression of the initialization of young people
Jessica Davis
Helps to read!! 🤣 ty
Camille f
3 days ago
Jessica Davis
Wait he was dead 3 years… but came by the week before and stole the money? So dad knew he was a ghost?
Wyatt Moon
comic gave me chills
Iantowuv
wow now I want to fight a fictional man for being awful to their son.
L Boogie
As he should (the fire)
Theo Wampuszyc
I got to page 12 and was like "oh I hope this one isn't a spooky comic" but ofc you broke my heart
Luise Sébök
Wow damn that was GUDDD!!
Linh Nguyen
Something for his lover to remember him by in the afterlife ♡
Zile Elliven
I don't know why, but the giant corn took everything to the next level.
Zesty Conversation
Side note: I found it especially refreshing that the motivation for separating the two wasn't necessarily homophobia. It can be read as such, but could just as rightly be one of any other issues the father had, with either of the boys, or even simply the motivation of *money* from the contract with the factory.
Zesty Conversation
I didn't grow up with SSTTITD, so only a few things from those books ever reached me as a kid. This was a fresh tale for me & it seems like a fresh tale on the formula, too. I've read some of those stories as an adult & most of them wouldn't have scared me as a kid; I don't find this one particularly *scary* either, but I understand it being categorized as horror. It's more melancholic & tragic - very "starcrossed lovers" (Pyramus & Thisbe/Romeo & Juliet), and while I generally gravitate towards the most eerie & unsettlingly uncanny of your comics in particular, this might be one of my favourites yet.
esper
that’s true but it hurts more when it’s queer people, knowing they couldn’t have lived peacefully either way 💔
Moony Mood
The neon cross at the cemetery! How can I not say cunt 🔥
LE BOY
That was great!!
Nils Thüsing
this is awesome and the poem is also really good!
Zippy
Loved it, read the poem, now I love it even more
Nina
Awwwww 🥺
Raskyl Flarestrike
Was wondering why the corn kernels were so big but then i saw it was 2070
Justine Kim
My eyes
Hank Cannon
This is brilliant. First day subbed and I am in tears.
MiserlyJuggler
Chorus of 'he had it coming' is playing in my head
Mrs.Sickler
My skin is literally CRAWLING from how good this is.
Diaman ruby
Damn 😭 bro burned his own dad. He lowkey had it coming, but damn
Lincoln Eddy
This was so good. Love beyond love.
Emily
To be fair in Adam stories everyone ends like this
AwesomeAsUsual
Love your work
Riley
😭😭😭😭
Ibon
QAQ MY HEART ACHES FOR THEM
Shea
Reminds me of the song: “Laurie: Strange Things Happen”
Cristina A
I mean. Fair ending.
Miriam
This one broke me :(
Opus Bloom
Great story! My only question is why he didn't take the hat, too.
Ernesto Rueda Mejía
Amazing!
Sarah Pascall
Aw, all the feels. But was expecting the corn to be like *that* corn 👀
LlamaTrauma13
Beautiful. I love this. And I love the world you set it in 💛
Winter
Aw man, this wasn't scary, just sad ;(
Racheal Winson
It's the same as the old story Adam wrote out. The girl wraps her handkerchief around her guys head and when she digs him up he has it on his head
Skye Cameron
Oh that is so beautiful and sad but also, can you imagine if That was the size of the corn in butter corn ramen?
Eunice Chan
Had an “Oh shiiiiit” moment. Loved this
c too
Loooooove this SO much
Ili Husna Aimi
Throwing up, gagging, sobbing. How dare you.
Breoni Hester
i've never felt more vindicated by a ghost story!!!!!
Sarah Ploof
Loooove this inspo for this. I grew up on those books. Your ability to reimagine and illustrate stories is amazing 😍
Mark houlihan
SPOILER WARNING ********* Mickey: “I look pretty good for a dead bitch 😏 “
rider.break97
This reminds me a lot of this book I read once called It Looks Like This by Rafi Mittlefehldt. Heavy trigger warnings for homophobia, death of a gay teen, and conversion therapy (as if that didn't just spoil the whole thing lol) but it was an absolutely BEAUTIFUL book, definitely recommend if you want a cry.
Erwin Hernandez
Awww this was beautiful 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲
Lauren D
Incredible 🔥🔥
Ahnzo Vincente
I know it's a horror comic but like WHY MICKEY NOOOO 😭😭😭😭
Emma Howett
I thought given the title was My Yellow Hat it might have some significance 🤷♀️
Caitlin Plank
Love this
john shaw
Wow. Adam you are amazing.
David Carswell
devastated.
Lauren
How damn stunning!
Savannah L. Hastey
It's clearly a ghost story, and also fiction. Why would it make sense?
russellrd
How could you 😭
Tristyn Rouark
This totally made me cry...
Chris Wing
I was just reading this story in scary stories to tell in the dark! I love your version!
Claire Callow
😭😭😭🌈🌈🌈
India Voerman
This is a very beautiful story 🥹
esper
i’m too lazy
Clarissa Frattini
What a beautiful story ! ❤️
Pedro Parente
noooo gimme back my gays ;-;
Emma Howett
But how did Mickey have the hat when he only gave it to him on the drive from the factory??
Bubblegum Banshee
HELL YEAH
Giulia Carvelli
Ohhhhh I love this 🖤
Cecile
I'm so glad I didn't read the caption first! It had me on edge the whole time, but what an ending!
M Suzuki
What a great comic!
Sammie Auburn
T_T OMG my poor heart.
Ronan Sullivan
He said three days not three years
Billy Dunbar
Rosie Brtk
You can't do this to me Adam 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔💔
Matea Barrett
Loooove this!!
Miss Stonehill
Love it Adam!!! 💞💞💞💞
Christian Santiago
😭 WHO’S CUTTING ONIONS?!
Edith
Ohh Love it, it's perfect!! The love, the spirituality, the gays... Ah ✨🔥
Kayla Newhook
Love it!
Melissa Gaugler
Thanks for the cry, Adammmm😭
Ghost
MAN THAT ENDING. GOOOOD STUFF ADAM.
Stephanie Choong
It gives me Miss Atomic Bomb by The Killers music video vibes iykyk 👀
Olgy Rodríguez
I love the color yellow (the color you say you buy an item of when you’re sad) and corn (just like the ramen horror story) are part of the plot. Like your special easter eggs.
Angelo Santini
This was a good one!!!
Viv
SOBBING. I got the tingles with the ending. 😭😭😭
Dani Franck
Now where are the patreon exclusives of them naked kissing
Bientoro Wibowo
🥲❤
Pingu
The high tech vehicle, genetically engineered corn, and neon cemetery are nice touches.
Sarah Wenger
Amazing but god, I wish Mickey lived :(
OMGitsSEDDIE
found a link with more info on the original folk song: https://mainlynorfolk.info/watersons/songs/thesuffolkmiracle.html
Lindsay Trostle
Incredible.
Pauley
anyway wear your helmets, kids
Maureen
Oh my heart. Wow what a story
Howard Orlina
that's the point lol, in the original story the dead guy's wearing the lady's handkerchief
Howard Orlina
you've done it again father
Kathryn Miller
Beautiful ❤️❤️
Raine Chester
Read the poem 😂
Raine Chester
This is heartbreaking
MIRAMARI (Mariana Gomes)
Hungry for lore
Sam
I was JUST listening to them tell a version of this story on Scary Stories We Tell On The Pod.
Grace 'Gengar' Soria
Man, I was not supposed to be crying during my lunch break. Excellent adaptation, Adam.
che
loooove this one, and so intrigued by the world they live in 🤔
Rach Meister
😲
Daniel
😭😭😭
esper
also did anyone else notice he had the yellow hat in the grave? or was that obvious and I’m just slow💀
Bailey Hinton
I want to eat nucorn so bad.
esper
Why do the gays always have to end like that 🙁
Kathleen Dull
Incredible, your renditions are always something else but this one felt even better
KXNG_PIN
He deserved it, to freedom!! Sad they couldn’t be together in the end 🥲
Miranda
You know what? Good.
Kaylyn P
I'm terrified of your corn. And I want to be the president of Calizona
Ben Bozovich
That was amazing!!
P00hPlays
Hell yea!
Maggi Saar
Beautiful 🥺❤️👏🏻
ADR
Wow. That brought me to tears. That was too darn good.
Erica
Wow. This one will stick with me
D
Oh wow 🥺 This was so good
S. H.
My heart T-T
CmmanderShepard
I love that it’s in a fallout setting! I had a feeling just based on the neon lettering in the first panel, I always use those for my settlements in Fo4 😅
Reddy
The lighting is EXCELLENT! ...so is so much of it. Thank you.
Blaqhawq
Well there's Cuzco Corn s'got pretty big kernels, softer than normal, at least from the soup (albondigas) I've had. Probably used for cornmeal. Would probably make a hell of a cornbread though.
Joelle Lardi
Wow. The whole world you created in this brief, tragic masterpiece!
minohoonoo
I love all of this but I'm kind of obsessed with the NuCorn...I wonder what the texture's like...
Amanda Arlene
This is so haunting and poetic. I loved that story as a kid and I really enjoyed your version as well. Thanks for sharing it with us!
HillaryGayle
Burn it down & don’t look back baby
Karla24.wintaebear
That's as good an ending as we could get.
Bella Lee
This is hauntingly beautiful
ScrapHeapChallenge
I love it <3
Errol Lobo
Amazing
Infinite Villager
This isn’t horror it’s just reminding me of my depressingly lonely life