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[Image Preview] Fixing That V-Card
🕑 Added 2023-04-24 21:40:17 +0000 UTCThis is not an animation (but it will be later down the line)
During my break, I found a good way for me to test an idea is to first make it into a short comic, even if I won't actually publish it. It helps me set up camera angles, character interactions and dialog.
I don't usually share it since it's obviously less fun than an actual animation, but since I have no content currently I might as well share it with you. Also, it's free so it really can't hurt and I figured maybe you might enjoy a bit more insight into my workflow.
This is just an intro.
The idea behind this one is some time between 4 and 5 Eliot finds himself on the island, and through this encounter/conversation with these 2 it becomes obvious he has not had a girlfriend yet (that's the awkward moment pictured in Page 008).
And since Tomi is best girl she of course proposes to fix that (Page 010).
I also imply a bit of history between Tomi and Zack (end of Page 005 - Page 006) as this is taking place a bit after a series involving these two I have planned as well.
Won't say much more because I think it would be more fun for you to imagine the dialog (and it would also help me check if I got the setting right, as if so the dialog in each panel should be obvious). This is the reason why I removed all dialog bubbles.
If you like the idea, feel free to post what you think the dialog is in the comments, I'd be curious to see your take on it, and I believe it would make for some nice interaction between us.
I know non animated content is less fun, but this since this is part of my workflow and I'm having lots of fun making those (I enjoy setting up character interactions so much), I've decided I should share it anyway as free bonus content instead of letting it rot on my HDD. If you aren't interested in that sort of stuff I'd understand.
Rest assured this is just filler until I'm back proper.
I'll see you soon.
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