Rooibos Chai
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TDB Check-in (1-27)
🕑 Added 2024-06-07 17:30:16 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
Don't have that much new for you, but wanted to let you know how things are going. I've more or less got my edits done for what will now be chapters 1-27, which takes us through the end of the presentation. All of that is available in the linked document, and this corresponds to the original chapters 1-24. The most recent edited chapters don't have a lot fundamentally changed in them, as they're just tweaked slightly for flow and to better integrate any stuff I've added along the way.
As you know, there's effectively six chapters after this (25-30) that I have already written, and I'm thinking now about how best to handle those. I think from a story perspective, I wound up spinning my wheels a bit through that section--not that they're bad but it felt like I kept going in circles trying to wrap certain things up and bring other things together, and I need to reevaluate exactly how it all should fit together. So that's my next immediate task, and then I'll be the clear and in a firmer position to just write the final bit. Thanks for bearing with me as I put it all together; I hate how long it's taken, but I also think the new edited version really has some strong stuff in it that I'm glad I was able to put in.
If you do read through the newly edited stuff, feel free to leave any comments or thoughts! Thank you for your support!
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Doggos R. Puppers
Subbed to this patreon just so i could binge this amd the cliffhanger with the teacher about to flip out even more is amazing but also, y'know, a clifhanger. My vote is to upload the rest of what you have
