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Minecraft GFs story posted!
🕑 Added 2022-04-15 18:23:57 +0000 UTCWhat If We Were Both Girls and We Kissed (In Minecraft) is now fully up on scribblehub! I wouldn't normally send a whole patreon update for that, but I wanted to note that I did a minor bit of rewriting to add to the ending.
A few of y'all who left me comments on the original were correct in that I still didn't entirely close the loop on the whole apology thread. I couldn't figure out how to fit that into the second chapter without stepping on the big reveal moment, but I kept turning the problem over and over in my head throughout the past several days. Ultimately, even though I'm worried that the ending leans too hard on chunks of exposition, I went ahead and redid part of it to add in a few more paragraphs of reflection and context. Oops. If I was a bit more clever and ambitious, I would try to do all this more naturally and through showing rather than telling, but for this story I think it still works well enough for my purposes. It's not that big of an addition, but I hope this fills Allie and Ashleigh out slightly more as characters and gives a bit more closure to an important aspect of their relationship.
If you're curious and don't want to read through the whole thing, the section in question is right after "A few months after... everything." and has been changed in both the googledoc and on scribblehub. Thank you once again for your thoughts and feedback!
