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Oedeweypus Complex (part 2) - page 18

🕑 Added 2022-03-09 16:30:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

stitchfan

i try to give honest feedback, most of the time i dont really see any issues, this one just caught me off guard due to looking weird. consider my lack of criticism on your other pieces as me saying "great job" when i cant get a neck to look right i just add a scarf or collar to a shirt XD ~~i have literally done this with della before~~

threeK

that's how you know they're good quality!

threeK

now LISTEN HERE- (...you're right, but dang, you didn't hold back for this one lol). i tried to fix the shading a BUNCH of times on that panel, but nothing looked right. i kinda... gave up. but tbh, i don't think it looks that weird other than the shading! ducks are weirdly shaped 🤷

stitchfan

Dewey - "I've only ever touched cardboard boobs before" Della - "that is the saddest thing i have ever heard...and i was trapped on the moon for 10 years" is it just me or is dellas neck kind of weird in this one? in panel 1 the shadow doesnt seem to exist on the right side, and in the under-shot of her head it just seems really awkward. the other two panels seem fine.