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Oedeweypus Complex (part 2) - page 16
🕑 Added 2022-02-27 16:30:00 +0000 UTC okay!! a few words! i'll be taking a short break from posting this comic (about a week or so), which is good because i've been meaning to adress a couple things i've been seeing in the comments! first off, i've been OVERWHELMED with support, and i cannot thank you enough!! i did not expect it at all, especially not at this stage (all they did so far was kiss). i love you all and you encourage me to keep making more stuff and share it with you <3 second, as i mentioned in previous pages, i made this MONTHS ago and would do things differently now. but literally re-doing the whole comic would be insane, so all i can do now is share my thoughts (and do poorly drawn edits;;). to be perfectly honest with you, i think della is pretty out of character. not outrageously so, but still, i'd write her differently now. even back then this is what made me the most insecure about this particular comic, but the good news is, i think i did a much better job in the next scripts! my whole reasoning was, in this very tense situation both della and dewey wouldn't be 100% themselves, but once things are resolved they'd go back to acting all bubbly and energetic. STILL i could have done a better job, so apologies;; lastly! this wasn't mentioned here, but on ib many people seem to think that the tag "incest" HAS to mean sex between relatives.. i don't know why. it just means characters from the same family share a romantic AND/OR sexual relationship. even if all they did was think about eachother and blush, that'd still count as incest. so yeah just to clarify, i'm not trying to clickbait anyone;;; that is A Lot, and i apologize, but then again, you're not forced to read it lol thank you again, i hope i can make better and better stuff for you as time goes on!!
Comments
stitchfan
I think what you have done so far is fine. "best" is a variable in this instance. marking it as sfw or nsfw, setting expectations. trying not to spoil content or mislead them into thinking its something else. i do appreciate you wanting to make it as good as it can be, you are doing fine i think. i've enjoyed it anyway XD. if you really wanna cover all your bases just have dewey reach 3rd base XD. thats nsfw enough i imagine.
threeK
thank you so much! i used to specify when a comic i posted was sfw, and didn't say anything for this one since it is. also i wasn't sure whether mentioning anything would... idk, ruin the surprise? i never know the best way to approach these things;;
threeK
i'm happy to hear you don't feel scammed haha OR that it's too slow, that's another thing i worry about;; thank you so much skippy!
stitchfan
the quality of your comic is very good, and the content is practically wholesome, you have nothing to apologize for in regards to what you have created. expectation might have confused some people about what was going to happen short-term but we all know where it is going, a slow burn is still nice, especially when its fun along the way. i do agree that della was kinda weird, but i also dont think it was any worse than the average fan-comic, the fact you are aware it had some issues means you've improved since writing/drawing it and that is good. maybe you could add in the description "eventually sex will happen" or "may take a bit to reach the saucy bits" just so people will understand that this is not a conventional porn comic where clothes magically disappear and sex happens within 3 panels. you made something enjoyable, cute, and fun, it wont be everyones favorite but it's nice and im glad you are making them. please keep up the great work.
Skip_tastic
I'm not sure why people think incest means sexual actions and not just romantic feelings towards one another but OH WELL, I don't feel clickbaited by these! I'm really loving the romance and development of it all! You're progressing it in the perfect way of not SUPER fast but also not agonizingly slow like some romance stories tend to do, great job!
