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Offers, Chapter 01: Part 03

🕑 Added 2023-12-28 14:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Abigail Gill

One thing I especially appreciate is that in those new pages you actually feel the discomfort and weirdness of Cole randomly appearing out of nowhere. I have to admit when I first read the old chapter, not knowing anything else, I thought Cole and Token were like on friendly terms, hence why I was a bit confused afterward seeing Token's growing discomfort with Cole. But with this new beginning, from the get got the awkwardness of the two is obvious and you have the foreshadowing of the future toxicity, and this is so great X3 Not that toxicity is great but you know... The chapter is great X)

Nox

Thank yooou, you're sweet AF x) It feels good to finally put to the page how I always intended for the beginning to be written~

Abigail Gill

This is grandiose. Seeing this updated version with the fresh memory of what the old chapter was... it feels like a crown proudly worn on the artist's head X)