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Dark Fate, Chapter 67

🕑 Added 2021-07-29 22:15:58 +0000 UTC

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J B

Hope he remembers to have his new ‘employees’ refer to themselves as such to the locals, at least as long as the mundane government or similar goodie-goodies maintain power

Jason Pickett

If you remove “target her in specific when they” it will make a lot more sense.

Jason Pickett

Just wanted to point out how awkward this sentence is: She’d been a ‘priority target’ when the surviving residents target her in specific when they rose up again, but they’d decided that enslavement and exile was a better punishment for her. A “priority target “ is by definition specifically targeted so it is redundant and hard to understand.

Paigeon

I liked the Crossover. And thanks for the chapter

Stuart Grosse

Plans? No. It could happen, though, but I typically write by the seat of my pants. So, no plans.

Martin Gamboa

when kuronoth first started trading on the market he DM'd a Black Knight-kun dungeon. always wondered if that was the first crossover reference or this main character in another life since he has had multiple

Grant

Nice shoutouts. Any plans for a crossover? I have always thought that crossovers are interesting ideas, but never go that well due to the many lead characters.

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Miles

I still miss Darkmore... :)

Nyotree

I love the fact that you added your two guys into this book is Awesome! And a great explanation of multiple universal theory now all we need is he who survives :)

Larry O. LeClair

i was waiting for both of them to make an appearance, very nice.


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