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Unfair- Chapter 22: Sponsored Content

🕑 Added 2020-06-17 21:29:38 +0000 UTC

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I put a bit of my own life experiences into everything I write. And yeah...I'm married and have had arguments with my wife. That's where I drew this from.

Smoke and barrel

I really like the way that you wrote that argument. They had a fight like a couple. With both parties saying things that they both mean and don't mean at the same time in the heat of the moment. They made up like a couple, with concessions and logic on both sides, just magnificent. It was very well done, and I feel that you have set the benchmark for argument dialogue. Thank-you very kindly for this latest chapter.

So one of the fun parts about this story unlike so many others is that there aren't nearly as many unknowns. Clark is writing this all in hindsight and talking to you, so he gets little stuff like foreshadowing. Because to him it's all 20/20.

babysofia1234

Dreading the day I suspect that's coming where everything comes unraveled. You foreshadowed that already... Part of me suspects she'll get picked up first and he'll be second though. Glad to see a new chapter!

Thank you! I like bringing these characters to life.

Very enjoyable piece of writing, as usual!


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