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Episode 3 now available

🕑 Added 2023-06-17 13:28:59 +0000 UTC
Episode 3 now available

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AmaraHmmm

My only wish regarding the story so far, and I understand if 100 people post, you get 100 different suggestions, is that I wish there were more choices for the MC, like whether or not he tells Kalie the truth about what he is experiencing (the forced sex I mean). It doesn't need to change the course of the story, actually, it shouldn't. The MC should always end up in the same position. It would just mean the betrawal he would feel would be deeper the more honest he would have been. He would have told his wife what he was forced to do, but she would have just brushed it off by not believing him (saying you are just trying to persuade me). Of course, this would mean even more work for this production team of only 1, so really, just keep going. I like it.

AmaraHmmm

I like this, I kinda hate that I do, but I like this. The Power (abuse) is probably key, because I wish no harm to anybody, but in fictional stories, I guess it's...(I don't know what word to use, Empowering? Exciting? A turn-on?). No debate here; this type of behaviour, any kind of abuse, is wrong, morally wrong. But again, in a purely fictional story, I like it.

Mabe

Great Update and a very interesting cliffhanger at the end. I will suffer terribly from curiosity until the next update :-)


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