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Sev Deleted Scene Part + Victoria CH4 POV #1 [band tier]
🕑 Added 2025-07-17 00:49:14 +0000 UTCHello! I'm glad to be back in the swing of things :) I feel refreshed and lighter knowing chapter 4 is done (aside from the errors and stuff but unfortunately it's just me right now </3)
Anyway! Because I worked on chapter 4 so long and worked and reworked it I have so many deleted scenes just sitting in my files. I thought it'd be nice to share what I know I won't use once in a while.
This Seven deleted scene is short (2.6k words) but it's what would've been the start of the talk on the bus. My original idea was honestly a mess and I sensed the original convo I had for them had no point. I try to make sure every conversation has a point to it, even if it's simply to develop the character or then I'd start to meander and yeah.
Plus–and you can tell me if I'm wrong—it didn't feel like Seven much. IDK! That's there for your reading pleasure! (I had to cut out a few parts because I was rereading and realized they were too good to leave as a deleted scene so hehe)
And then there's the Victoria POV of their secret meeting (5k words). I'm excited for Victoria's development and that meeting was just the start so :)
PLAY SEVEN'S DELETED SCENE (2K WORDS) (BAND TIER)
PLAY VICTORIA'S POV (5K WORDS)
Comments
Dani
winning over the wet cat that is Sev is not for the weak, but every time they frown at their feelings, I got it in me to withstand all the BS thrown our way in the next interaction.
koma
Amy, could you pin the masterposts to the beginning?
