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Contest Entry 1: RemRamWaluigi's Two Buns Full

🕑 Added 2021-11-20 04:09:16 +0000 UTC

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Soddy12

Wow this was very good. RemRam really nailed increasing tension before the event without sacrificing pacing. Believable dialogue, lovely and exciting descriptors with real energy behind them, and likeable characters with the perfect amount of "literary" fluff. I honestly only realized it wasn't undertaker33 by style and not quality. A fantastic entry.

bouncypear

WOW. No joke, that is fantastic. I can't wait to see the rest, if they're anywhere as good as this! I made audible satisfaction noises (such as "wow") while reading this. That's how well-written it is.


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