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Evil Inc After Dark Stories — Baalor
🕑 Added 2022-03-13 00:00:03 +0000 UTCYou may remember Baalor from a recent EiAD (below). He's a genie that granted the wish of a young couple who wanted to start a family. I wanted to try something new* and write a non-comics story that went deeper into this scene. It tells about how Baalor came into their lives — and what happened afterwards. As with all exclusives, please don't distribute/repost!
This is way outside of my comfort zone, so I'll be interested in hearing your thoughts! I've prepared this in two file formats — EPUB and PDF — for your reading enjoyment. It will probably work best if you import it to an eBook app such as Apple's Books app.
EPUB: Evil Inc After Dark Stories - Baalor
PDF: Evil Inc After Dark Stories - Baalor
*I actually tried this a couple times before — about five years ago — and it got mixed reviews. You can find the series here (or click the EI erotica tag below).
Comments
Michael
Even here "CommanderH" gets a shout out. That did make me chuckle. Makes me wonder of some of the other Chat Fans are heroes/villans too (Bull4You is maybeTaurus?). From a critique standpoint, your free form writing has improved a lot, in my opinion, from the Milking Minotaur stories.
Brad Guigar
Thanks for that, Rick! 🙂 I’ve fixed the error. If you’ll re-download the file, you’ll have the corrected version!
Mr. Nobody
Terrific!
Rick Greene
Great read, although you have one continuity error. Page 5, paragraph 2, the narrator says "Steadying the camera in one hand, I freed my cock. I started stroking my member as if I were in a trance." But further down that page his "left hand furtively pawing my cock through the straining fabric of my slacks. Then on page 7 "Overcome, I used my free hand to unzip my pants. I threaded my shaft through the fly. Quietly, I began fisting my member."
AuldMisdione
Fantastic story. It's nice to see a genie/djinn who takes pride in their work. I hope you do more stuff like this in the future.
