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Drow and Ogre-succubi sketches done

🕑 Added 2020-09-16 18:22:33 +0000 UTC

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Redscript

Yeah, not gonna lie, I like that too. It seems to make everything intensener.

daKatzman92

I love how you just tack these ludicrous stretches of time onto each phase.

thomas ragonesi

Am I the only one who wants to be her so bad....

Redscript

Honestly, she's got nothing to complain about.

thomas ragonesi

i dont see anything wrong here shes getting what she asked for XD

Redscript

I know. We're hurdling now. Unfortunately, I want the last page to be the epilogue, so the Archdevils (that's their name, right?) will get only two pages. I can't add any more pages cause I want this to be printable, if anyone's degenerate enough to print this, they'll have that option.

Booker

Great stuff! Really like where this is headed! Suggestion: With this being a shorter comic the climax seems to be approaching rather quickly. I remember that when you were outlining the structure of the comic you weren't sure if the archdevils were going to get 3 pages or 2, but reading these last pages, I think this pace kinda needs a 3 pager to finish it off so you can really dig into the horror show aspect and show how the that experience will be the tipping point that messes up our subjects mind forever.