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Magic Crystal Fighter Storyline
🕑 Added 2024-09-30 12:00:00 +0000 UTCThanks to my friend 【CC18】 for the assisted translation.
Episode 1
Magic Crystal Fighter, is a member of the Exorcist Association of Magical Girls, they are responsible for the protection of the city and eliminating the threat of demons. During a mission, Vivian and Dolores were ordered to destroy a demon village in the frozen realm. As the battles along the way were too easy, they began to be careless, and then he was suddenly attacked by a special demon and lost consciousness. The demons sucked up the magic of the girls after the magic while leaving the transformed two in the depths of the village of frozen hell. In this space, the magical girls will automatically absorb a lot of natural magic that is difficult to extract directly from the environment and then will continue to leak magic because they are in a coma, demons can easily absorb their transformed magic to strengthen their own power. And with the help of this power, they defeated more magical girl. In the end, they were transported back to the human world by the teleportation magic of their fellow rescuers. Unfortunately, due to an error, they were transported over the city, but fortunately, they ended up falling on soft garbage bags.
Episode 0
【P01-P08】Dolores, a trainee Magic Crystal Fighter, is ordered to investigate a young girl with dangerous powers, and when she catches up with her, another Magic Crystal Fighter, Risako, has already been easily defeated by the mysterious girl and fallen into a coma. The mysterious girl is named Vivian, who claims to be investigating the disappearance of a magical girl in the city, she concludes that Risako is the culprit of the disappearance, and the two sides disagree on what they want, so they can only use their strength to speak. Vivian's strength is slightly better, after hitting Dolores hard, she expected her opponent to be defeated as easily as Risako. But Dolores didn't fall down, she tried her best to use her strongest must-kill technique, under the blows of countless magical sword blades, the bruised Vivian soon fell to the ground unconscious.
【P09-P32】For safety's sake, Dolores first tried to undo Vivian's transformed state and then checked her body. After confirming that she was not a demon possessor, Dolores reported the current situation to the priest of the Exorcist Association. The priest requested Dolores to bring Vivian back to the headquarters for a more detailed examination and to consider inviting her to join the ranks of the Magical Crystal Warriors after confirming her magical girl status. Although Dolores was skeptical about the priest's request, she decided to carry out the order first.
【P33-P47】At this time, Vivian gradually regained consciousness, and Dolores immediately knocked her out with her hand blade and carefully confirmed that she was indeed in an unconscious state. But right at this moment, the delayed magic released by Vivian at the moment she regained consciousness suddenly activated, Dolores who was untransformed had no magic resistance at all, and immediately fell into unconsciousness and collapsed on Vivian's body after being hit.
【P48-P71】A few hours later, Vivian woke up again and she searched Dolores, but suddenly her back exploded. It turned out that the previously defeated Risako had also regained her consciousness and did a sneak attack on Vivian with magic, and Vivian, who was already seriously injured, immediately fainted after being attacked by magic in her unchanged state.
【P72-P82】Although Risako managed to knock down Vivian using her remaining magical power, her physical state was also at its limit, and to ensure the completion of her mission, she used puppet magic to manipulate Dolores' and Vivian's bodies and lock them together with her own, before releasing her return magic on herself, and then immediately lost consciousness. Although all three were deeply unconscious, under the manipulation of Risako's remaining magical power, the three people, who looked like puppets on strings, dragged each other toward the Exorcist Association.
【P83-P88】Along the way, they passed through the crowded downtown area, and finally arrived at the entrance of the Exorcist Association, just at the time when Risako's magic was completely exhausted. At the same time when she lifted her transformation, the puppet magic also disappeared, and the three of them immediately collapsed onto the ground.
【P89-P96】A few hours later in the early morning, the priest found the three piled up together at the door, he first used his magic to temporarily seal Vivian's ability to transform, then when he realized that they seemed to be about to wake up he used his electric shock magic to pierce the brains of the three, causing them to fall into a deep coma once again. He then fetched the cart used to transport the three bodies to the underground christening room.
【P97-P104】The priest pulled the lever in the operation room, and the unconscious trio was hung like dead pigs and moved to the holy water production plant. As the body scanning apparatus operated, Vivian gradually regained consciousness, and she finally met the real mastermind behind the disappearance of the magical girl, but before she could break free from her bonds, the priest used hypnotic gas to make her fall into unconsciousness again. Dolores was also awakened by Vivian's screams, she too hadn't expected such a dark side to the organization she belonged to, but she too quickly lost consciousness after being forced to inhale the hypnotic gas. Under the hypnotic gas, a large amount of yellowish liquid was discharged from the bodies of the magical girls, which was recycled by the priest and poured into glass bottles labeled holy water, each of which also had the producer's picture attached to it. After making sure that the holy water had been thoroughly extracted completely, the priest pulled the lever again, and Vivian and Dolores were sent by conveyor belt to the baptism room, meanwhile, Risako had long since completed her baptism, and she was thrown directly into the daily maintenance room.
【P105-P130】The bodies of Vivian and Dolores were thrown into Petri dishes filled with holy water and specialized medicines, and then the priest activated the switch for the baptism ceremony. Stimulated by the electric current, the two magical girls were forced to undergo an incomplete transformation in a state of unconsciousness, and then their souls were drawn out by the machine. The priest carved a magical incantation on each of their soul bodies before pouring the soul bodies back into the two of them through their mouths so that the baptismal ceremony would be completely finished. From then on the two of them would not question the priest's orders in any way, and they officially became members of the Magic Crystal Fighters.
【P131-P150】The next day Vivian's family received a box of money and a handwritten letter from Vivian, and since then she has been living in the Exorcist Association's dormitory. Every week the Magic Crystal Fighters not only had to fight demons but also had to participate in a charity event to replenish their magic power on the weekends. On the day of the event, after paying the ransom, the enthusiastic citizens could enter the designated room to contribute their energy, which would be converted into magical power for the magical girls. After a busy night, the exhausted and unconscious magical girls would be transported to the daily maintenance room, where they would be immersed in the fruits of the day's labor to recklessly absorb the magical essence.
【P151-P162】A few days after Vivian's disappearance, the magical girl Erena stumbled upon a photo on social media of Vivian walking downtown, manipulated by puppet magic. Erena immediately guessed the true identity of the person behind the manipulation, so she gathered two of her companions together and attacked the headquarters of the Exorcist Association.
At the time of the attack, the priest was resting with his men in his bedroom when suddenly there was a violent explosion downstairs, and the priest immediately ordered Dolores to go and check out the situation and was protected by Risako and Vivian as he hid in a safe house underground. Dolores arrives at the scene of the explosion and immediately starts a battle with the two intruders, but she doesn't realize that Erena is equal to her in strength, and with the aid of Sweet's lollipop bombs, Dolores quickly falls into a disadvantage. At this critical moment, Dolores once again gathered all her strength and unleashed her strongest strike, and the two intruders were enveloped by countless magical sword blades. After the blades dispersed, only two bruised bodies were left behind, their consciousness had been completely lost, and only their flesh was barely supporting them without collapsing. However, after Dolores chopped off the two's magic power source gems, Erena and Sweet immediately fell straight to the ground and fainted.
【P163-P238】
Dolores used a de-transformation spell on the two girls lying on the ground and searched their belongings. She then used fire magic to damage their clothes and transformed their underwear into styles preferred by her master. After reporting to her master and receiving further orders, Dolores used binding magic to strap the two girls' legs together, suspending them in the air, making it easy to transport their bodies. However, she did not anticipate the presence of a third enemy. As she activated the transport switch to the underground safe house, she was struck in the abdomen by Ann’s magic. In her non-transformed state, the magical girl had almost no defense against magic, causing Dolores to instantly lose consciousness. Ann then threw Dolores into the transport tunnel and entered an unknown underground area herself.
After navigating the winding transport pipes, Ann landed smoothly on the ground, facing Dolores and her two companions who were battered and bruised from colliding inside the pipes. Immediately, Ann administered a magic recovery potion to her companions, then used healing magic. A few minutes later, Erena and Sweet quickly regained consciousness. Just as Erena had guessed, there were huge secrets hidden in the underground of the Exorcist Association, and they decided to delve further into this underground area to dismantle the evil organization. Erena scanned the underground area, discovering it to be a massive labyrinth filled with dangerous traps. Thus, she instructed Ann to use the unconscious body of Dolores as a human detector to clear the traps ahead, while she determined the route based on the scanner's guidance. The plan went smoothly, and Dolores successfully cleared the traps along the way. However, the reinforcements that had been sent to assist her, Risako, had already arrived at the scene under the cover of invisibility.
Risako followed Erena and her group, launching an attack under the cover of explosions triggered by the traps. Empowered by magical girl powers, Risako easily knocked out the unsuspecting Erena and Sweet with a hand chop. She then used an explosive rune to deal with Ann, causing her to lose consciousness while Dolores’s body collapsed as the puppet manipulation magic dissipated.
【P239-P280】
After effortlessly taking care of the three intruders, Risako stacked their bodies along with Dolores's, and according to the usual procedure, she first removed Ann’s transformation state. Risako then attempted to wake Dolores, but due to triggering numerous traps on the way and suffering from toxin needles and magical explosions, Dolores had fallen into a deep coma and showed no response to Risako's slaps. Feeling a bit helpless, Risako realized it would be difficult to carry four bodies alone, but soon she devised a clever method. Risako used puppet manipulation on Erena and Dolores to make them stand, tied a stick to their necks, and then secured the other two bodies to the stick, allowing her to expend only half of her magic while transporting all four bodies to her master.
After traveling for a while, Erena gradually regained consciousness and was surprised to find her body uncontrollable. However, she quickly understood her current state and immediately transformed into a magical girl to counteract the effects of the puppet manipulation. She then launched a surprise attack on Risako from behind. But Risako quickly regained her composure from the shock of the ambush and swiftly used a cloning illusion spell to summon four false images, while she herself remained invisible, waiting for the perfect moment to strike Erena.
However, Risako did not anticipate that Erena could identify the illusions through tactical goggles and locate her true form. In the next moment, Erena's charged shot accurately struck Risako in the head, and before she realized what had happened, Risako immediately fainted.
【P281-P301】
Erena organized their current situation. Although they were close to the end of the maze, two enemy members had been eliminated. However, two of their own team members had lost consciousness and it was unclear how many enemies remained. Therefore, the priority was to heal their injured teammates and then attack with all their strength.
After making up her mind, Erena dragged those who had fallen to the ground together. She removed Risako's transformation state and checked the remaining magical energy of all four. She discovered that both of her allies' reserves were not promising due to prior battles and attacks. Dolores, having used her full strength in an earlier combat, was nearly depleted and now served merely as a burden. However, Risako still had substantial magical energy since she hadn't fully exerted herself before Erena incapacitated her brain with a strike. Therefore, Erena extracted Risako's magic and redistributed it to the injured teammates. As their magical energy replenished, they regained consciousness. Dolores, who had briefly awakened, was promptly knocked out again by Erena. After discussing their current situation, the three decided to immediately launch an attack towards the end of the maze to completely destroy the evil organization.
【P302-P351】Soon after, Erena and her group reached the end of the labyrinth, where they faced its ultimate defense force—a former friend, Vivian. Now under the control of her belly rune by the priest, she was a loyal slave ready for their final battle.
Elena and her team launched an attack, but all were repelled by Vivian's magical shield. Confident, Vivian decided to eliminate these invaders in one go to present them as trophies. She conjured a massive fireball with both hands aimed at Erena’s group. When the smoke cleared, they remained unharmed because Dolores and Risako had been hidden invisibly while their bodies blocked the explosion using puppetry magic. Although Vivian was surprised by this tactic, she knew that these opponents would eventually fall to her. However, when Erena activated an overload mode with her next shot, it penetrated Vivian’s shield and precisely struck her brain. Even for a powerful sorceress like Vivian, such magical shock to the brain caused unprecedented damage, rendering her incapable of thought; her body began to tremble.
Sweet seized this perfect opportunity, unleashing her strongest attack, followed by a series of explosions. Vivian's clothes were shredded, and her consciousness vanished, though she clung on physically for support.
The entire battle was live-streamed to the priest’s computer through surveillance cameras. The priest regretted not having these three adversaries fight together; their individual errors had led them to be systematically defeated. With only one last trick remaining, he took out a remote control device and assumed command of Vivian's body. As she lost consciousness, Vivian began pooling her magic at the top of her head, releasing it so quickly that even her transformation-sustaining magic was exhausted. She removed her magical form amidst a burst of light. Perplexed by what had transpired, Erena and her team saw that Vivian wasn't falling but instead gathering more magic. Feeling panic-stricken, they attacked furiously, but couldn’t stop the growing magic sphere atop Vivian’s head from enlarging. After exhausting all her remaining magical energy, she lost control and collapsed like a broken puppet. An enormous fireball fell to the ground and exploded; Erena and her team hastily erected a magical shield, but due to their depleted magic, it broke, releasing them from transformation. The explosion’s flames consumed all six magical girls, who were then tossed into mid-air by gale forces against walls and debris until they landed among ruins once the energy was fully released.
【P352-P381】After an unknown period, the priest opened the deformed entrance of the shelter. He found the battle's fire extinguished; all lights were damaged, leaving only faint groans in the dark hall. Using magic to illuminate the area, he located the unconscious magical girls and checked their consciousness levels, ensuring those nearly awake were administered a sedative.
After confirming their deep slumber, the priest retrieved his latest invention—a mobile holy water production vehicle from storage. He transported all the magical girls to it, connecting its ends to their mouths and lower regions. Activating the device, a special anesthetic nutrient solution flowed through the mouth pipes. The magical girls converted this into magic; excess was transformed into holy water for use as a clean energy source in city electricity or magical weaponry. This allowed military forces to handle potential threats from monsters within the city without needing the magical girls’ direct involvement in urban defense operations. On ordinary days, their task would be producing holy water, though they might still be sent on extraplanar missions if needed.
Days later, due to his significant achievements, the priest was promoted to bishop of the city. During a celebration banquet attended by city leaders and key figures from influential families who were invited to witness his latest research outcomes, everyone praised this great invention. The new bishop also made a public announcement at a press conference afterward, encouraging men across the city to donate nutrient solution components to the church to contribute to humanity’s progress.
Episode 2
【P1-P9】In Episode 0, Dolores and several other magical girls are brought under the church's jurisdiction. Under the bishop’s command, they venture into various worlds to vanquish creatures threatening humanity or perform mysterious nighttime tasks. Each weekend, they replenish their magic and produce large quantities of holy water for the city’s energy sectors and military.
After maintaining this routine for some time, Aurora, the head of the school detective club, receives a new investigation request. Eleanor, who discovered an inappropriate video on social media featuring a woman resembling Dolores, approaches Aurora for help due to her inability to ask Dolores directly about it. After extensive research, Aurora finds more videos and photos implicating Dolores and contacts one uploader, who provides full access to the disturbing content.
Faced with this evidence, Eleanor is reluctant to believe that Dolores is involved, suspecting coercion or assault by a landlord. Just as they discuss the situation, both receive a text from Dolores inviting them over. Seizing the opportunity, Aurora retrieves her trusty anti-wolf shock device and heads to Dolores's house, determined to uncover the mastermind behind these events.
Upon entering Dolores’s home, Aurora senses something amiss; Dolores’s dress is shorter than usual, and her smile seems more suggestive. Pretending not to notice anything suspicious, Aurora decides to ask about Dolores’s landlord before further probing. Meanwhile, Dolores serves freshly brewed red tea, which Eleanor eagerly drinks, captivated by its unique aroma. Observing Dolores's peculiar smile as she pours the tea, Aurora doubts its safety and discreetly empties it onto the carpet. Shortly after, Aurora notices Eleanor becoming disoriented and collapsing into a chair.
【P9-P61】Realizing that Dolores is no longer who they thought she was—and potentially part of a sinister organization—Aurora pretends to lose consciousness on the sofa. When Dolores checks back after leaving the kitchen, seeing both girls unconscious, she confirms their slumber and begins executing her master’s orders. She inspects their undergarments for approval but notices Aurora’s body is tense. Deciding to play a game with her “prey,” Dolores uses mimicry magic to simulate a phone call. As Aurora tries to eavesdrop on the call, she's swiftly restrained by Dolores, who intensifies the hold until Aurora faints completely.
While Aurora struggles, inadvertently kicking Eleanor, Dolores recovers as both girls regain consciousness during transport. Dolores smiles and then surreptitiously uses the mysterious liquid from the tea to sedate Eleanor again with a potent hypnotic gas. Watching her friends incapacitated, Dolores feels excitement about completing her master’s task and carries them into an underground area via a secret entrance.
In this location, interconnected tunnels lead like those used when transporting defeated magical girls previously. During transport, Aurora and Eleanor regain consciousness but are quickly subdued again by Dolores's magic. Upon reaching the containment room, she conducts body searches, replaces undergarments with those preferred by her master, and collects any stained garments for display.
After completing these tasks, Dolores starts logging information about the captives to submit for review when Aurora regains consciousness. Seizing the opportunity, Aurora uses a shock device to incapacitate Dolores before assessing their situation: no cellphone signal, unable to carry unconscious Eleanor while escaping an unknown area. She plans to use the shock device on the mastermind and contact authorities via their communication devices.
Determined, Aurora decides to use her disguise expertise. Using mimicry magic, she swaps hair colors with Dolores’s appearance to evade detection. After disguising herself, Aurora examines the door lock, believing it would be vulnerable to Dolores's biometrics. However, as she approaches, the lock activates an alert after scanning her abdomen. Surprised, Aurora considers whether Dolores’s personal items might also function as a security pass. Before reacting further, automated defenses engage, deploying magical beams that incapacitate her.
【P62-P90】Meanwhile, on the rooftop of another school, Sweet was also waiting for her prey. Soon, Kira and Ruby arrived at the location as invited. The two felt that Sweet had undergone a sudden and drastic change in personality recently and were planning to ask her what was going on. Unexpectedly, Sweet suddenly handed them two lollipops. Kira, confident in her strong constitution and ability to resist any strange drugs, exchanged a glance with Ruby. She decided to try the lollipop herself; if anything happened, Ruby would subdue Sweet. However, contrary to Kira's expectations, the lollipop tasted completely normal. Ruby carefully examined the inside of the lollipop, suspecting suspicious drugs might be hidden in the filling. Suddenly, Ruby noticed the lollipop before her growing increasingly brighter until it exploded. It turned out these two lollipops were magically crafted by Sweet. While edible, Sweet could detonate them at any time.
Sweet looked triumphantly at the two girls twitching on the ground. Their clothes were shredded, and they were completely unconscious. However, transporting two unconscious people from here wouldn't be easy. Sweet pulled out a garbage bin she had prepared earlier, stuffed them headfirst into it, and finally covered it with a garbage bag. This way, she could leave in plain sight. So, Sweet wheeled the garbage bin away on a flatbed trolley, taking a hidden secret passage within the school directly to the prey processing room where Dolores and the others had been earlier.
As soon as Sweet entered, she saw the two figures on the bed and Aurora slumped by the door. However, because Aurora had disguised her hair color, Sweet assumed Dolores had foolishly triggered a trap herself. After mocking Dolores's stupidity, Sweet proceeded to dress the prey she was responsible for in the outfits chosen by their Master. She then registered the two new captives in the folder. Just then, Dolores and Eleanor on the bed began to regain consciousness. Seeing the figure beside her with altered hair color, Eleanor mistook her for Aurora and was about to greet her. To her surprise, the first thing the figure did upon waking was deliver a heavy blow. Eleanor struggled only a few times before succumbing to unconsciousness again, her questions unanswered. Hearing the commotion behind her, Sweet turned around and saw Dolores, looking pleased with herself after knocking out Eleanor. From Sweet's perspective, she didn't know if these two fools had some personal grudge, but judging by their hair colors, there was no doubt both were prey listed in the registry. She immediately struck Dolores's head with thermal magic. The searing energy severely damaged Dolores's brain, causing her to collapse instantly, rigid and staring blankly. She wouldn't regain consciousness for days. Having dealt with these two potential troublemakers, Sweet decided to continue her mission. She hoisted the two prey she was responsible for onto her shoulders and headed deeper into the stronghold.
【P91-P105】Several hours later, Aurora, slumped by the door, slowly woke up. Fortunately, it seemed her true identity hadn't been discovered, and she hadn't been imprisoned. She began pondering why she had triggered the trap earlier. She had assumed the smart lock used facial recognition, but recalling the scanner was positioned roughly waist-high, she finally realized where the true access key must be. Aurora quickly got up and searched Dolores's body, indeed finding the small toy she was wearing. Aurora hesitated for a moment, but ultimately, resolved to catch the mastermind behind these events, she resolutely equipped the small toy onto herself. After adjusting to it for a while, she stood opposite the smart lock. As expected, when the scanner activated, it recognized the toy on her body, and the lock opened. Considering she might soon face the mastermind, Aurora decided to continue her disguise as Dolores to explore the deeper areas. Struggling, she lifted Dolores and Eleanor onto her shoulders and set off towards the inner regions.
【P106-P121】After passing through a dark passageway, Aurora once again used the ID device she was wearing to open the door before her. The sudden transition from the dim tunnel to the bright room temporarily blinded Aurora, preventing her from seeing the interior clearly. But when her vision cleared and she saw the scene before her, she froze instantly. The two previous prey were mounted on the wall as trophies using scrap steel pipes. Standing before them was the author of this "artwork," Sweet. Seeing Aurora disguised as Dolores, Sweet thought she had also come to submit her prey and stepped forward to inspect the trophy's quality. However, just as she checked whether Eleanor was in a deep coma, Eleanor suddenly opened her eyes and delivered a sharp kick squarely into Sweet's jaw. Unbeknownst to Sweet, back in the tunnel, Aurora had already awakened Eleanor; they were waiting for this perfect opportunity to ambush. Had Sweet been in her transformed Magical Girl state, such an attack would have been almost harmless. But caught off-guard in her untransformed state, the heavy blow sent her staggering briefly before she collapsed to the ground, unconscious.
【P122-P136】Seeing Sweet lying on the ground, convulsing and incontinent, Aurora judged she was no longer a threat. She casually tossed Dolores, whom she had been carrying over her shoulder, onto Sweet's body. Eleanor then nimbly jumped down from Aurora's shoulder. Aurora scanned the room; it seemed to be the dead end of this area, with the only exit being the tunnel she entered through. Now that both the perpetrator and victims were here, she decided to quickly take photos for evidence. Only with this proof could she call the police for further investigation. So she took out her phone and photographed the scene inside the room. But just as she tried to send the photos to a police contact, she suddenly noticed the previously weak but usable phone signal had vanished completely. At that same moment, a hidden door slid open in the wall beside Eleanor. A hand emerged from within, firing a magical energy ray that obliterated Aurora's phone and simultaneously pierced through and scorched Eleanor's brain. Eleanor immediately lost consciousness, collapsing onto Dolores like a puppet with its strings cut. In her shock, Aurora looked towards the hidden door. Right then, a second figure inside extended a hand and cast a teleportation spell. Before Aurora could comprehend what was happening, she was teleported mid-air and sent plummeting headfirst onto the hard ground. After a faint struggle, she too fell into a coma.
In less than a minute, the two who were just celebrating their victory had become convulsing, urine-spraying unconscious bodies. Then, the two architects of this tragedy emerged from the hidden door: Vivian and Situ Ann, the controllers of the control room. The room they had been in was the core area of this underground base. Looking at the pile of four fools before them, Vivian and Situ Ann couldn't help but laugh mockingly. However, they failed to notice the cold muzzle aimed at them from the ventilation shaft in the ceiling behind. And in the next instant—a gunshot roared.
Comments
M.vv
The story of 1 is followed by 0, which is the origin story of the superheroes that eventually form the Avengers. Of course, since I didn't think of making 0 until after I made 1, there may be a few things that don't add up, but I've done my best to perfect it.
SiliconHater
Huh, does the Episode 1 happens before Episode 0?
M.vv
OK, thanks for the tip~
M.vv
OK, thanks~
39zz
good recap, and like what the previous comment said, make sure to take breaks when you need it :)
kr121234
Decent translation! You did very well. Hope you keep continuing this series. Don't forgot to take rest!
M.vv
It's an introduction to the plot
Natsu Uzumaki
What is this?
