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Death is a Suggestion 6. Tragedy, Death, and a Rise from It

🕑 Added 2024-09-13 00:56:05 +0000 UTC

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Tom C

What?!? Sign me up! His character is quite different to Ike but I think with something to warm to, balancing out the snark a bit, he’d be a great read. Definitely keen to see where the story goes Great work man. Love the skill hunter story and this looks like a good one too.

noct

Oh yeah, the main point/joke is that he's the front liner and the zombie heals him. I need to make that clearer, it sounds like! Thanks for the feedback! Deeply appreciate it

Tom C

It’s good! I’m a bit wary of the whole “necromancer is the only class” thing. It’s a limiting statement that doesn’t allow for future changes? Like what if you change your mind? Also not really sure about stuff where the MC gets other beings to fight for them, need to have some skin in the game with self-development and then using their strength to fight? If he can raise dead etc that’s great but I’d also want him to fight. Just my thoughts! When I read the blurb and it said “necromancer” I almost stopped reading right there because it conjures images of some old bloke standing at the back of an undead army, doing very little. Glad I kept reading, hopefully he’ll turn out to be “more” than the stereotypical necromancer Tftc!


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