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Memoirs 305 - Past and to the future

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 03:04:55 +0000 UTC

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Noah

That was my first instinct as well

lenkite

> “This is not one of your Memories,” the other Scarlett remarked nonchalantly. “You will not be able to merely break it.” But it IS one of the inheritance's memories. So she should be able to. If she could break the others, by the same logic she should be able to break this one.

Tin

I started to think along the same path until the point about control… She stopped forcing the rift to get results then there was Arlene’s mention of not trying to control and do everything herself. Having did that, yes I agree that there might be improvement in this chapter : Either more hints, more emotion or growth ie she has a realization to let her feelings flow in a different way. I am sure the author reads our comments and may update or include considerations in the next chapter.

Tin

I’d have liked her to consider summoning Vail again or in the prior chapter making it more clear Vail removed all traces of herself.

Eyo

I don’t really know what’s going on, but I support it

Maximilian Faltermeier

If dropping bombs turns into dropping nukes… and then you realise that these nukes have been nothing more than a tickle compared to what follows. All hail Scarlet the dragon summoner, Student of Arlene (whose full title I just forgot), bringer of lost arch mages, friend of the extinct Zuver and touched by divinarch Thainnith himself. And many more things that shake your sanity and blow your mind 🤯

Noralations

Hi, I'd love to chat but I think you're friend requests are closed. Feel free to add me it's - Eleanoralations - on discord!

Pandalf

I also like discussing stuff! Such a shame that there isn't a discord server for this series. I'd love to talk so if you want you can add me on discord - pandalfaga. As for the server for the author I'd even personally could create it and make it look appropriate, but I wouldn't be able to moderate much, though if Flamerunner is interested I could create it my spare time.

closeded

She asked Arlene to teach her, she built the relationship, she chose to oppose rather than ally the anomalous one. Scarlett is the cause of this. It was even hinted that this would happen when Scarlett asked her alter why arlene could see the rifts, and the alter didn't know.

Swinter

Yeah I mostly agree. But it shouldn't be a Complete loss, because it cheapens the sense of how "epic" it is. We'd only need Scarlet to be the one instigating their arrival, she'd have no control otherwise. She wouldn't even have needed to know it was They who'd arrive. Just that she did Something to bring Anything in to help. Completely cutting her lose and having a wildcard come and help out randomly and on their own in a... I mean, it makes Scarlet feel powerless when the chapters up to now has built it up to give her a moment to shine. Takes the wind out of things rather severely, when all she needed to be was the instigating moment. The thing that calls the trio forth even with just the lightest touch. I think literally everything could have been the same as it is in the chapter now, with just a single paragraph connecting Scarlet trying Something and then having the trio arrive. It would have made it her doing, while at the same time leaving her out of control on what came xD. I like discussing stuff, don't feel any pressure to answer :P.

The Lord has given

I disagree. It a symbol of the growing uncertainity of the future and the growing pains of making decisions with uncertain outcome for Scarlet while she also received a lesson to have some things be done by others. Its moves the story forwsrd even if you might be dissatisfied with scarlet looking a bit "bad" on top of thats a biased view in the looks of the others scarlet has risen in power even more because seemingly she deals with much more than they have envisioned

Noralations

I get one you mean but I think Scarlett not being involved is kinda the point. She’s a control freak, losing control and having to deal with that feels like the natural progression for her character. Also Arlene just gave a speech about not doing everything herself so it kinda fits.

Pandalf

Well, I have a lot of trust for the author, so I hope they will make sense of this without making too much of a mess. Also the loss of agency is kinda one of the points of this scene. As Arlene herself said that for once Scarlett wouldn't need to do everything herself, though how needed the loss of agency was for the series and characters is still in the air. But as I said I believe in the author, so I think we will see an interesting development.

Swinter

The dragon summoning? Cool as all hell. I got chills. Arlene and team? Would have been cool if Scarlet did something, anything, to be the cause of them arriving. With them appearing randomly... It sucked Scarlets agency out of the scene and made it a lot less cool at this point in the story. Was more sour than anything else xD.

Lendon Shurt

Agreed, while it is great that we see Arlene coming to help out Scarlett, it feels somewhat cheap.

Swinter

Honestly? It kind of ruins it a bit that Arlene and team appears unsummoned. It weakens Scarlets agency in the scene significantly since, in the end, she's just like a child being rescued by those with more power. That can be fine... But here it was just terribly placed and removes agency from her. It had been another thing entirely if they arrived after Scarlet did something. Even if it was just reaching out into the void, or whatever it is, to find Anything that might help. Just her feeling a sensation of something that could be beneficial, and summoning it as a wildcard, whatever it was. It'd still bring forth literally everything here, but it'd be an action actually taken by Scarlet. It wouldn't just be... Oh look, random saviours! Hurrah! Gave the end part of the chapter a bad taste.

I Dewa Bagus

Best chapter ever!

Pandalf

Ngl, this is the coolest deus ex machina I have seen

Sawyer Ford

Oh boy, Scarlett is going to have quite some explaining to do after being outed for having the legacy. And that's beside the fact that she knows (of) the three who came to their rescue! Gaspar is surely spiraling down the rabbit hole now.


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