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Memoirs 291 - Extrications

🕑 Added 2024-09-19 21:28:35 +0000 UTC

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FutaFister

Thanks for the chapter

TheMartinalfa

I am realy waiting for system shop upgrade. I wont say Scarlett is weak but the extent she have to go to be at least capable of supporting her team is realy crazy. And even still she is short race sprinter. Like there have to be between all Divine relics, Zuven artefacts, fae tresures have to be something that would improve her overall magic aptitude or mana capacity. I like story a lot. I just realy want some more personal upgrade to Scarlett rather than another item.

Storyhunter

Hmmm 🧐. Faith in her companions is an excellent opener. The empress popping in and handing her this choice is awesome. Deciding to walk back into the seed of fire. Is an interesting if risky choice. I get the feeling that she is now encountering the fire slumbering within the ring. Along with the memories of her past self along with what made the Hartfords the way they were. Especially foundations of what made the original the way she was. The tip here is the gentleman saying that she will likely change as a result..... The feeling I get for this sequence is that this is a type of vision quest. It would be interesting and semi appropriate for a spiritual guide to arrive. Especially since she made the choice to follow through and face the former selves memories. Making the choice to go on the vision quest is an important step. All this is ab excellent set up for walking realizing your in a layer of reality off of "inception" for anyone who understands the reference. .... Good chapter as it allows the reader to grasp the importance of the situation and gives the main character a chance to make meaningful choices. instead of seeming to go along with the flow of a dream sequence.....

lenkite

"“Rather, it is simply not my place to intervene.” what sheer rot. He is a hypocrite so revealed Rosa's status. If he was a "neutral observer" he wouldn't have done that.

Noralations

Thanks for the chapter! I’m actually super excited for this arc, Scarlett is with the others so much I’m excited to see her on her own. :)


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