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Memoirs 272 - Some slight trespassing

🕑 Added 2024-07-07 21:28:29 +0000 UTC

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John Brady Anderson

Well, she IS trying to make sure the Princess's big sister is safe.

DocteurNS

And she'll convince the second princess to keep her presence quiet, and somehow make the princess think Scarlet is doing her a favour.

Colin Love

The plot thickens. I’ve wavered about my options on just how much fate should play. Anything less than unknowable and esoteric seemed risked the chance of drawing the reader too much into minds eye view mode. I mean such thing isn’t a problem in small doses. That is to say it risks showing the authors hand so to speak if not done right or at the right times. I like the fate grove we’re now shifting into, the game storyline plays well. It helps ground “us” as the reader into Scarlett’s perspective, perhaps imo because I feel closest to “original persona” as a reader in a non fantasy world. I feel closest to that viewpoint in a way that’s hard to articulate other than its familiar and known. Not to say I’ve not enjoyed the aspect of coming to grips with inherited emotions and memories that make up “new” Scarlett. I very much have enjoyed her finding trying to find an equilibrium that she can live with while “being constricted emotionally by fate”. Not discounting her growth in character as a person and as the subject of this story. Which leads us to where we are now. All the pieces that have gone into Scarlett growing in stature, getting to grips with memories and emotions not originally her own have led us to a higher level interaction & introspection. I look forward to the coming updates, good job!

pelya

Scarlett will elegantly introduce herself as if that's her own room. Being brazen is how she is getting through most conversations with other nobles.

Sheffi Ben-David

Well, other than the obvious question of whether the princess would report Scarlett/call for guards, I wonder if she knows anything about her sister's book. If not, imo the next best option probably wouldn't be asking beldon to look for who wrote the book (I mean, by all means ask but I doubt it'll be that easy) but instead trying to track down the two "good" companions that Scarlett didn't recruit. If they're in this book, wouldn't it make sense that the princess would try to track them down, or that the other "hero" already recruited them?

Omen

Oops didnt check under the covers properly

Kiru

Wonder how her initial scan of the area didn’t pick up the sleeping princess

Logan

Well. This is going to be a thing


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