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Memoirs 227 - Home visits

🕑 Added 2024-01-28 22:59:47 +0000 UTC

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Dimitri T

Thanks for the chapter.

Logan

Typo: Suddenly, (s)he wondered if her

Hayden D

I stumbled a bit when reading this section below. I think it’s because the second sentence is an unclear shift in perspective, as well as the wording being confusing about what he is thinking about. “Rosa had to admit he had a point. Suddenly, he wondered if her influence might not be part of the reason why Scarlett was always so showy as well. The thought was both alarming and oddly satisfying.”


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