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Memoirs 221 - False appearances

🕑 Added 2024-01-04 22:40:31 +0000 UTC

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DocteurNS

*Eventually, they reached the open area that served as the village square, where a platform at its centre played home to a group of playing children.* The double "played"/"playing" feels a bit awkward.

Colin Love

It wasn’t easy to get Arlene to accept that issuing the quest. I assume it could be for a number of reasons the simplest being real life. Looking in overview there’s something of a feeling of upon finality to completing a quest. What that means going forward in totality is anyone’s guess I suppose.

xxmaniaxx2019

Thanks for the chapter!


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