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Memoirs 116 - Aftermath tea party

🕑 Added 2023-01-08 22:43:18 +0000 UTC

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Tin

Lady Withersworth especially and her husband are really interesting. I hope to see them more. Leon’s flushing out to be really interesting. Makes me root for Scarlett to continue to surprise and him and see a future “save the knight in distress” situation. Regarding the Withersworths there’s so much implied there. From how tactical the wife is to how they interact off each other. To myself as a reader they mysteriously exude more to the eye then they BOTH appear. I say both, as I’m sure such a strong woman despite appearances would lovingly only put up with a remarkable man. I hope to see their kids too, likely also key players in the empire.

Tin

I agree. I figured out Withersworth spoke, but I was confused for a second. Right before that there is dialogue btw Scarlett and Leon to figure out too. Also a suggestion to subtly clarify.

Artman

“Mendenhall, you say?” Scarlett turned to look at Lord Withersworth, who held a thoughtful expression. “I recall meeting with that woman once or twice, some years ago. If I’m not mistaken, Dean Godwin told me she was quite dependable. Although knowing him as I do, I was never certain whether he meant as a wizard or as a gopher to clean up his messes.” Some confusion on if you meant Scarlett to be speaking at the start.


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