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Memoirs 108 - Hallway crawling

🕑 Added 2022-12-08 21:27:56 +0000 UTC

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John Brady Anderson

“He gave her a long look, then finally nodded her head.” -I believe this should be Leon nodding HIS head here

Tin

I think a grammar mistake here switching to first person when it should be third, I wouldn’t she ignores it,” Allyssa's voice came from behind me.

lenkite

"I’ve been using it quite a bit now, though, so don’t go expecting too much of me if something happens late" Bard needs to [Level Up] fast.

Maids

Poor Rosa. Wandering in a spooky mansion, made even worse thanks to her altered perception, only to get a reminder about the massacre at Freymeadow.

Alpenmann

Thanks for the chapter. Quite the spooky house.


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