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Memoirs 76 - The trek back

🕑 Added 2022-08-07 20:32:15 +0000 UTC

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John Brady Anderson

“But common sense dictated that this should at least be less cost-expensive” I think this should be “less expensive” or “more cost-effective”.

John Brady Anderson

wear a part of sturdy boots Probably “a PAIR of sturdy boots”

Tin

She probably needs to use all the points available to her give low level now. But a reminder of the gamer’s emergency points hack… keep some points in reserve to give yourself what you need in a dire situation.

Tin

Grammar “The young man in question didn’t at all look he’d just been sitting in a trance for over two hours. “ should have “look like he’d”

Tin

Lol. Fynn being Fynn.

Faiir

Waaaaaaat


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