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Memoirs 74 - A deal once struck

🕑 Added 2022-07-31 21:37:50 +0000 UTC

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Flameruner

I did feel myself that the way this was worded turned out somewhat lacklustre and did not quite communicate the full intent of what was meant. What you wrote here is in fact more closely aligned with the original purpose. (That is, temporary non-interference on both ends) I have currently been editing this chapter to make things clearer and improve some of the pacing that I was unsatisfied with, and hopefully it'll be better then. I'm a bit regretful that the edit came so late, but it is what it is for now.

lenkite

This was pretty badly stated deal. Permanent non-interference only for temporary absence ? So Scarlett can't do anything to break the demons possession now and she just got a bit of time - to do what ? "..you would have my word that I will in no way try to interfere with you, nor your current connection with Miss Hale." " I’ll agree to this little plea of yours, but ONLY until the next time I can come out and play. " WTF. that is terrible. Original Scarlett should have locked up her face for such a bad deal. She should have explicitly stated: "Very well, only a dentente from both our sides then." Now, the only way to be safe is to let Rosa go and loose a healer since she agreed to basically do nothing to interfere.

John Brady Anderson

That was so interesting! I love the character development that comes up in the dungeons, they are a wonderful place to reveal parts of characters that may not feel as natural elsewhere.

Tin

Wow that was interesting!

Alpenmann

Thanks for the chapter.


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