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Memoirs 130 - Preparations

🕑 Added 2023-03-02 22:28:51 +0000 UTC

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John Brady Anderson

Absolutely loved this chapter, I really enjoy her interactions with Garside, he is both wonderful support and a bit of a foil for her in a way, he very much feels like he is still part of the adventuring party with how connected he is.

John Brady Anderson

"just in case anyway was curious about which area she was interested in" I think anyways>anyone here

Flameruner

Not sure where those words went. Fixed it now, so thanks for pointing it out!

Tin

This sentence starts with “Roughly” which seems to be missing some words. Also, it seems a bit too long… “Roughly were new ones recently purchased, and most of them were completely irrelevant to her current objective, but she’d had them all gathered just in case so that it wasn’t clear which area in particular she was interested in.”

Tin

Missing word? “Garside. I would ask that you never change, but I imagine that would come to regret that eventually.” I imagine that “I” would…

Alpenmann

Thanks for the chapter. Yeah, heist time. Now I have Brooklyn 99 in the Head.


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