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Chapter 259: Amelia - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2024-06-15 07:46:02 +0000 UTC

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Rain

Nice TFC

Pride mystic artificer

Ok, i have got to say this is the most convoluted and weird way you could have done this, their are a number of ways you could have made this so much easier and less plot hole riddled. first, you could have made anise simply be a prosthetic repair person who takes the prosthetic for a day or two and returns it good as new. second, you could have anise leave and have “gotten a job in [place]” so that she didn't need to set up a convoluted second identity that will fall apart the first time someone realizes that their prosthetic is repaired before they walk to the back, or anise breaks character and suddenly you have the problem of 5 abilities being shown not two. third, it takes months to train a person to stop using their natural mannerism, and a further weeks to train them to adopt new ones. Constantly switching back and forth between two would likely takes years, why do you think spy’s don't do that, not only is it hard and easy to accidentally break cover but it also doesn't hold up to scrutiny. It just is weird and convoluted for absolutely no reason, its not like anise is hard up for cash. The entirety of the crew is already quirky and eclectic as hell, i promise no one (in or out of the story) will blink twice at “i want to be a super witch” anise dropping out and living on her friends dime (which i'm certain she is already doing) and training to be some sort of guard for her. And if she really needed to get a job to maintain appearances she has two super genius friends both of whom ar prime to need “assistances” and she is trained enough to help them both in a way less disastrous way if the lie breaks down


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