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Chapter 117 - A Budding Scientist in a Fantasy World
🕑 Added 2023-04-22 07:14:10 +0000 UTCAuthor’s Note:
All right, I have a confession and an apology to make, as well as a notification of a few changes to the two previous chapters.
As a writer, my fundamental rule so far has been to never change a major detail of a chapter once I post it. Everything should remain basically the same as when I make the chapters available to all of you, so that I don’t kind of force readers to reread previous chapters unless they want to. Cosmetic edits and such are fine, but I try to leave things the way they are once I post a chapter.
I’m breaking that rule this time.
This is because, honestly, when looking over chapter 115 and 116, I’ve realized that I’m not really happy with the quality of some parts of each chapter. I feel that I normally do a better job of linking up details of scenes and parts of the plot to the overall plotline I have planned for the rest of the story, and I work hard to make sure that there are little bits of foreshadowing and details readers can explore if they’re interested.
I feel that these details are missing from these two chapters.
To be clear, those details are in my plotline. But they aren’t in the actual chapters. Because I forgot to include them when writing the scenes for chapter 115, and then when I was writing chapter 116, I was trying to figure out how to accommodate the missing chunk of chapter 115 that I forgot to add to the chapter and the plotline says is supposed to be there.
I’ve been trying to write each chapter while still following the mistakes I made starting from chapter 115, branching the story off into a sort of… parallel plot line. But honestly, it’s starting to create a few weird plot holes that I’m not in the slightest happy with. Instead of leaving this issue in the story, I’ve decided the story as a whole would benefit if I went back and added in the parts of the chapter that were supposed to be there, even though it requires reworking a big part of the chapter and definitely constitutes a major change to a previous chapter.
To be clear, I’ve deviated from my plotline before; in fact, the second volume of the story got a massive plotline rework somewhere around chapter 30 when I realized I wasn’t happy with my original plans for the story, and almost half of the plot points for the second volume got reworked so that they synch up with the third volume much better. But usually plotline changes happen because I realize there’s a better way to format a scene or a better way to structure the story. This is the first time a plotline deviation has occurred because I forgot to do something while writing the chapter, rather than because I intended to change part of the plotline.
So, the changes TLDR, for those who don’t feel like rereading:
Chapter 115:
Alice failed to make an observation I originally had written down in the plotline. The fake villagers of the village had a fair bit of [Farmer] mana in their bodies, somewhat similar to Boris. Alice spends a few paragraphs noticing this, and trying to figure out how and why this could be occurring. And there are also some notable implications that adds to the chapter which, honestly, are kind of important to the story. I’ve been trying to figure out how the plotline works without that point, since chapter 115 was originally supposed to lightly foreshadow a few things about future plotliens, and also link up nicely to the conclusion of volume 2 of the story. But because I forgot to add this detail in, it has had a rather bad ripple effect on both the scene and its interaction with other plotlines. Adding it back in just makes everything make much more sense, even if it requires I break one of my rules about editing old chapters.
(I also added a small bit of text to the chapter in bold text for those who want to skip unchanged things and start reread the chapter from the parts of the scene that got changed. The overall flow of the chapter is… MOSTLY the same, but there are some key differences to the initial investigation of the village that have ripple effects for the story).
Chapter 116:
A couple of things regarding last chapter. First, some ripple effects from the changes to chapter 115 are now present. Ethan is less sure about the origin of the fake villagers, and acknowledges that things are very odd about the village. Also, a lot of the dialogue related to introducing Alice to the tea party was reworked. It feels better now in my opinion.
Actual chapter starts here:
The discovery Alice failed to notice wasn't severely impacting the story YET, but it would have created bigger issues down the line, so I figured breaking one of my rules was worth correcting the issue before it propagated later in the story. But sorry for making a major change to a chapter that is already posted and available for reading. I try VERY hard not to make changes to chapters that are already available, but I think this is the best decision for the story as a whole.
After Ethan finished talking with Alice and arranging details about the tea party, including things she needed like proper clothing and {Etiquette} teachers, he left. Alice was left alone with her thoughts again.
She frowned, thinking about the ‘tea party’ Ethan wanted her to attend. She had agreed to it, because having new resource channels and levelling boosts would absolutely be helpful. However, she didn’t actually have any suitable clothing for a tea party with two Immortals and a member of the royal family. Nor did she have any real understanding of what etiquette looked like in Illvaria. Which meant that the potential advantages of attending the tea party also had some very significant annoyances that came with it.
On the bright side, she had about two weeks to prepare. Given how much the System accelerated learning, that was a reasonable amount of time to pick up the skills she needed, even if they would be somewhat low in level. However, Alice still felt nervous. She sighed.
Then, she redirected her attention back to her experiment. She needed somewhere to focus her nervous energy and take her mind off of things for a while. Besides, she still wanted to see if she could create a class seed in a magic seed slot, and since she had two weeks, she wanted to see if she could reach level 75 in [Explorer of Magic] before the tea party. Even if she wasn’t going to brag about her level to anyone, it would certainly feel reassuring to have another Perk from her highest level Class available to her.
Therefore, Alice started working on her experiment again.
Since Alice’s {Broken Seed} Perk was off cooldown, she could finally try forming a class seed inside of a magic seed slot. {Safety Analysis} informed her that what she was about to do was… reasonably safe, if not entirely safe. Which was good enough that she was willing to go through with the experiment.
Alice started wondering what class seed she should copy for her experiment. She had a lot of class seeds she had seen over the course of her time in Luliv, and Alice wondered if there was any benefits or drawbacks to using one specific seed for her experiment.
Eventually, she decided to copy her [Explorer of Magic] class. It was the class seed Alice had the most familiarity with, since it was her highest level class, and so it seemed like a reasonable choice for the experiment. Alice didn’t think it would really matter which class seed she tried out in this case, so she decided to take the path of least resistance.
Then, Alice focused on her empty magic seed slot, and started working on forming a class seed.
The formation process started relatively normally. Alice drew in mana, focused on the idea of what an [Explorer of Magic] was, and compressed her ideas into a magic seed. Since Alice had a great deal of familiarity with what an [Explorer of Magic] did to level up, she had a reasonably good understanding of the Class as a whole. Forming the magic seed wasn’t very difficult.
As the magic seed started to condense, Alice carefully observed it with one of her mental divisions. As Alice watched, the System mana in her surroundings erupted, trying to help her form her Class seed. Alice noticed that, once again, she had a strong feeling that she had seen something similar to the System fractals before. It was much more complex in the hands of the System, but Alice was sure that there was something very familiar about some of the fractals she was seeing in her surroundings. But she couldn’t quite put her finger on what she was seeing, yet. It was an incredibly frustrating feeling, since it felt like the answer to an annoying question was on the tip of her tongue, but she couldn’t quite remember what she was going to say.
Alice frowned, but a few moments later, her attention was dragged away by the needs of her Class seed. Since she still couldn’t figure out why the mana fractals the System was using seemed so oddly similar to something else, she would try not to think about it. Sometimes, distracting yourself from a problem was the best way to get new perspective on it and find a solution.
After that, Alice noticed that the System mana seemed… confused.
Which made sense. Alice was trying to make the System do something it didn’t seem designed to do. It wasn’t strange at all that the System wasn’t quite sure how to react. Luckily, Alice’s experiments in forming magic seeds without System interference or assistance helped her a great deal here. Since the System wasn’t quite sure what to do, Alice simply pushed through the issue she was encountering on her own, using her pure magic seed to help filter and manipulate the mana in her surroundings to help smooth out the process of forming an unusual magic seed. At the same time, Alice made heavy use of {Speed Experimentation} to make sure she had time to react to new problems as they cropped up, and made sure she was ready to activate {Broken Seed} the moment she felt something was wrong. Safety was the most important part of this experiment, after all.
After several minutes of fumbling around with mana, to Alice’s surprise, she realized that she was actually succeeding. She had expected to fail this time. She had considered this experiment to be a practice run that she would need to repeat several times before she got this experiment right. However, it appeared that all of her other experiments and hard work had prepared her for this attempt better than she had thought they would.
Alice grinned.
And that’s when everything went horribly wrong.
As the magic seed snapped into place, taking on the twisted form of a half-baked Class seed, Alice felt a sudden barrage of information assault her mind.
She felt a cascade of images tear through her very being, trying to pour into her thoughts and set them alight like oil poured on a bonfire.
Explorers of Magic explore magic, and the very core of what makes an explorer of magic exist is their desire to explore and learn. Knowledge is what matters. I need to explore magic. I… NEED TO EXPLORE MAGIC. Alice’s thoughts expanded beyond what a human’s mind could possibly encompass, filled with an all-consuming drive to explore, learn, and experiment with information about magic. It consumed all that made her human, all that made her Alice, and all else besides the crushing, overwhelming need to learn and investigate at the cost of all else. Even if she starved to death, Alice couldn’t be bothered to stop pursuing the knowledge that eluded her. Not even for the fraction of a second it would take to eat, or sleep, or drink.
At the same time, her body started to tremble, and Alice started shaking as if she were in the midst of an epileptic seizure. The need to explore magic was so overwhelming that her body simply couldn’t handle it, and it was almost literally collapsing out of the foreign need that was overwhelming her mind. Alice had always loved exploring magic and learning how it worked since the moment she had discovered its existence. But now, the desire to explore magic was so differentfrom her own thoughts that it was as if her personality was being replaced as she watched.
At the same time, Alice felt a certain… connection with the world around her. One that she had never felt before.
She could feel the expectations of a little boy, dozens of miles away, as he thought about the Mages his mother had told him about. According to his mother, mages explored the deepest secrets of mana and the world around them, searching for truth, and Alice could tell that at this very moment, he was thinking about what being a Mage meant. She could feel his admiration towards Mages as they were depicted in stories, and a faint desire to one day join their ranks.
She felt the expectations of a girl who had first formed her magic seed, and was venturing out towards Metsel. Her father had told her about the magic academies of the capital, and she had resolved herself to join the military in exchange for an education. However, deep in her heart, she wondered about the true nature of magic, thinking about the mana that every Mage in the world used to fuel their spellcasting. Even though her career path was focused on fight, at heart, she longed to focus on research and unravel the mysteries of mana.
She felt the weight of Ethan’s thoughts on the exploration of magic, dozens of times more clearly than she felt the expectations of others. Ethan believed that anyone who wished to pursue the nature of magic and find the deepest truths of the world and of Mages would be an eccentric oddball, someone who loved studying magic and learning about the world around them almost as much as they loved living.
However, Ethan’s thoughts had also begun to twist recently. More and more… Ethan’s image of an [Explorer of Magic] resembled Alice herself. Even though Ethan didn’t know her specific class name, whenever he thought of what an [Explorer of Magic] looked like, he subconsciously thought of Alice.
She could feel the thoughts of a long-dead Mage from centuries ago, pondering the nature of magic as he sought to discover why Mages had magic cores in their bodies and normal humans didn’t. Surely, with his brilliant mind, he would be successful in learning what made Mages different from other people…
In a split second, Alice felt the thoughts and expectations of hundreds of thousands of people pressing down on her mind like a billion ton mountain, flattening her under their weight. She felt every single human being’s thoughts on what exploring mana meant. Every single person who was alive right now. Every single person in the past who had ever thought on the subject. All of their thoughts and feelings on exploring magic were tangled together into a giant ball of ideas and feelings that was tearing into Alice’s very being.
Before Alice’s all-consuming need to explore magic and experiment could truly devour her sense of self, the System mana around her seemed to realize what had happened. Like an angry swarm of bees, the System mana descended upon Alice’s mage core, wrapping itself around the magic-seed version of [Explorer of Magic] and disentangling it from her being. It didn’t shatter the magic seed: instead, it was more like it unraveled the connection between the magic seed and who Alice as a person was, leaving only the mechanical components of the magic seed behind.
Alice’s desperate, overwhelming need to experiment with magic quickly faded away, and the memory of who she was, her humanity, started inserting itself back into her brain. Like a soothing painkiller, washing away the maddening chaos of connections, emotions, thoughts, and needs, Alice felt herself start to return from the state of mindless need to explore magic.
Warning! Violations of Free Will are not permitted by the System. Core violation detected.
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She shuddered as the strange set of impulses drained away. Alice hadn’t been able to understand why Boris had farmed so frantically before now.
However, Alice had a sneaking suspicion that she had just experienced something similar to what Boris had been dealing with all this time. She took a few moments to just take deep breaths, trying to understand what had just happened.
{Safety Analysis} had claimed that the experiment was largely safe. However, her sense of self had very nearly been destroyed during the experiment. How in the world was that safe? Alice felt the urge to scream and punch her pillow well up inside of her, as terror started to leak out of the fragmented thoughts left behind after the experiment. She took a few deep breaths, before she managed to calm down again.
A few moments later, she realized why the experiment was ‘safe.’
She had done the experiment while in contact with the System. And the System, apparently did not allow violations of free will to occur. In fact, after Alice’s odd [Explorer of Magic] Magic seed had been created, the System had responded in the most aggressive fashion Alice had ever seen. While the System had always been fast in responding to problems, the System this time had practically rushed into her body and actively scrubbed out every single connection between her mind and the problematic seed.
While the risk of losing herself had theoretically been present, it had been almost wholly negated by the presence of the System.
In other words, even though the experiment would have been mind-numbingly dangerous without the System, given the way Alice had conducted the experiment it was almost completely safe. While there was some room for errors to occur, as long as Alice was in contact with the System, the experiment she had just done was seriously unlikely to actually harm her.
Alice shivered again, and decided to take a few minutes to lay on her bed and just relax. Even if the experiment had been quite safe, it had done serious damage to her nerves. The feeling of losing who she was as the identity of an [Explorer of Magic] devoured her thoughts and personality had been… terrifying.
Finally, her nerves were steady enough that she could really think about what she had learned.
What exactly had happened, and what did it mean?
For a moment during the experiment, Alice had felt as if her very identity and sense of self was being overwritten by the desire to explore magic. As if everything that she was, every facet of her identity, was simply being replaced with one all-consuming trait. Alice was able to feel that this was very different from her own, natural curiosity: this was a fundamentally foreign set of ideas and emotions that had existed in her thoughts for a short period of time before getting cut out of her mind, leaving her own personality again.
Interestingly, identity of an [Explorer of Magic] hadn’t been created by Alice’s thoughts. Instead, the image of what an [Explorer of Magic] was… had been defined by random people who Alice had just barely been able to feel during the experiment. As far as she could tell, those ‘random people’ included every human being who had ever lived on Luliv, although the influence of human beings who had been dead for hundreds of years felt much fainter.
Alice once again thought of Boris, who obsessively tried to farm and didn’t speak much anymore.
For whatever reason, the System seemed to struggle when interacting with people below the age of six. Without the System’s help, if Boris was exposed to the same mind-numbing crush of the whole world’s definition of a [Farmer]…
It was no wonder Boris stopped talking with his mother, stopped playing like a normal child, and started trying to farm nonstop.
In fact, if Alice thought of mana and magic as being related to ideas and concepts, perhaps it made sense that children below a certain age had a harder time adapting to mana and keeping their sense of self intact while interacting with it. They weren’t old enough to have a strongly established sense of self yet, which might make it harder for them to shrug off the minor mental effects mana seemed to have on its users.
Or Alice could be mistaken on how the System worked to keep people’s personality from being influenced by their Class. Frankly, she wasn’t sure. The fact that Alice was able to distinctly separate the ‘unnatural’ impulse to explore magic made her feel a bit relieved, because she was able to easily distinguish who she was from the mind-numbing pressure of everyone else’s ideas. However, the sheer weight of everyone else’s ideas had nearly crushed her.
Suddenly, Alice thought of something else.
She frowned, and then pulled up two of the Achievements present in her Status Screen.
Immortal’s Apprentice at the battle against the Society (Rarity: 4)
As a talented combat-specialized Mage who is apprenticed to Ethan, the Immortal of Spells and Seeds, you participated in one of the battles between Illvaria and the Society of Starry Eyes, and played a notable role in securing victory for your side. Even if you didn’t distinguish yourself as an MVP of the battle, you performed above and beyond what would be expected of you for your age group. Illvaria is watching you!
+30 Class Experience to your ‘primary’ Magic-related class (Explorer of Magic), +15% Class Experience to all Kinetic Magic related classes. The effect of the {Divided Attention} Skill is increased by approximately 50%.
The Achievement {Immortal’s Apprentice at the battle against the Society} had been the Achievement Alice had gotten after rescuing Samantha. Alice hadn’t thought too much about the Achievement afterwards, since the bonuses were rather average compared to some of her other Achievements. It gave her an extra magic tendril, which was quite nice, but it wasn’t a very important Achievement overall.
However, she remembered thinking that the description of the Achievement was a little odd. The Achievement specified that she was a combat specialized Mage, even though anyone who knew Alice knew that she was mostly research focused. However, many of the people who had participated in the battle didn’t know that. As far as the average [Soldier] knew, Alice was a combat-specialized Mage who was apprenticed to Ethan because of her promising fighting skills.
The Achievement description didn’t reflect Alice’s actual skill set; instead, it reflected what the [Guards] and [Soldiers] thought of Alice.
The other Achievement Alice pulled up was the {Murderer} Achievement.
Murderer (Rarity: 4)
You have slain another human being.
Effect of Strength, Dexterity, and Perception increased by 1%. Classes with some relationship to fighting other humans gain experience 15% faster.
When she had fought against an ambush from the Sigmusi Colonia and won, she had gained an Achievement called {Murderer}. Even though she had clearly been acting in self defense.
Why was the Achievement titled ‘murderer,’ rather than soldier or something else?
Alice suspected that it was because people’s perception of anyone who killed another human being got tangled up with the Perk title, meaning that anyone who got the Achievement ended up with the {Murderer} achievement, regardless of whether they were acting in self defense, or as a soldier defending their country, or as a serial killer.
The hints that Achievements were influenced by people’s perception had been present all the way back as far as Alice’s first fight with another human in this world, and she had never fully picked up on those hints until now.
How much of the System was actually influenced by the perception of people in the world? In fact, what if the System itself was influenced by the perception of humans living in the world? Perhaps the Church of the System wasn’t as natural of a religion as Alice thought it was. If whoever or whatever had created the church was aware of the effect perception had on parts of the System…
Then cultivating an image of the System as a generous and benevolent god was a pretty good way to avoid any negative influences people’s perception might have on the System. Alice had no idea if that was actually intentional or not, but it was at least plausible.
Alice sighed. There were just too many possibilities and new things she needed to explore. And she doubted she had even thought of all of the implications of this discover; it just fed so neatly into everything related to the System that she needed to rethink how several things worked. Immortals. Classes. Achievements. Skills. Almost every part of the System might work a little differently than she had first thought they did, because the perception of others apparently influenced how the System as a whole worked.
However, at the very least, Alice intended to wait a while before trying another experiment like this one. Even if it was safe, her nerves might collapse if she tried this again in the near future. But deep in her heart, Alice knew that she would need to investigate this more in the future. The implications of this experiment were just too far-reaching, and she definitely needed to understand how people’s perception impacted the System if she wanted to understand how everything worked together.
But for now, Alice laid on her bed and stared at the ceiling. She needed some more time to finish adjusting after the terror of nearly losing her sense of self.
You have leveled up!
Explorer of Magic: 74 -> 75, Scientist 56 -> 58, Scholar 54 ->55, Survivor 54 -> 55
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I subsumed myself into the cultural zeitgeist of a magical world and all I got was this stupid tee shirt and a single level in my primary class. Seems a bit underwhelming even with the bump in difficulty after 75. I guess she hasn’t really digested the info or firmed up any conclusions yet, but she certainly explored.
CaylaCat
okay but like, did half the Explorer of Magic experience go to the seed that got deleted resulting in one level rather than two?
CaylaCat
dimensional manna isn't necessarily effected by this. all we know is that system achievements and classes are shaped by perception
MindWright
I actually considered that, but it would also mean nearly everything we've learned about this world is wrong or based on faulty assumptions. Instead of being Isekaied from our Earth or an Earth-like alternate Alice would either have been traded between two simulated realities, or what she believes she knows about her origins is simply wrong.
Treviisolion
It is possible that the ASCII is a hint as to the origin of the system. There are a number of hints that humans are not originally from this world. The fact that some of the plants and all the non-magical animals seem to be similar to their Earth counterparts, while all the monsters are fantastical in some way, plus the fact that humans react so insanely poorly to mana and were according to the scant records remaining, bodied hard by the monsters suggests strongly that humans did not evolve on this planet, but rather appeared out of nowhere along with a bunch of their plants and livestock and other animals. Those plants and animals being Earth-like suggests they are from Earth (or at least some version of Earth) as the chance of some random planet unassociated with Earth evolving the same subset of plants and animals is next to nil. Finally, there are a number of weird points about this society’s knowledge. The knowledge about biology could have been developed as organic tendrils made experimenting orders of magnitude easier, but microscopes don’t seem to be a thing, and the differences between bacteria, viruses, and other disease-causing pathogens is not easily determined without access to a microscope. Electromagnetic seeds are another such oddity. Electricity and magnetism are not obviously connected, and the electromagnetic seed seems to prevent the actual connection. It almost seems like a bunch of people who had knowledge of the more fundamental rules of our world got lost in this world, and their children’s perceptions of the rules learned from Earth founded the basis of the perceptions that created the base seeds and classes. If so, the ASCII could be a clue that the creator of the system spoke English, or perhaps the collective desire of humanity for some divine ex machina create a literal ex machina in the form of a computerized system with error messages in ascii binary because that is what they thought would happen based on the fiction from our world. Of course if that’s true then there should be some remnant of Earth’s languages somewhere on this planet, so if it turns out that’s not the case then this theory is probably wrong.
Diego Rossi
The rewrite was well done, and a very important set up for this chapter. After reading it, it was clear to me that something had happened to the spies, with the "Farmer" and "Hunter" mana taking over. It almost happening to Alice is very important, I feel. You aren't the first writer that redo one or more chapters. It happens. Thanks for your work.
Diego Rossi
Actual chapter starts here: is one paragraph earlier than the actual start of the chapter.
Derek Walker
The only reason I am skeptical is because at least for Seeker of Truth, almost no one has any idea or conception of what the hell Alice is doing/has done/will do /etc. so I think in this case rarity may be tied to objective considerations. But again that’s speculation
Abborre
Considering the link to other peoples minds and perceptions it could be that rarity is related to how many the achievement is connected to. Like if the army witnessing Alice had been bigger she would have got a higher rarity one... Maybe?
MinE
I think levels are the main bit, but other people probably influence the other benefits of the achievement. Maybe tier 2 classes get an exp boost if people think about you doing something related to the class?
ShadeByTheSea
I feel that was achievement worthy :/ thoughts? it's fine if it's not though.
MinE
That suggest either the perk is reliant on outside assistance from the system or those that are suffering picked up the perk recently.
ShadeByTheSea
I think 1 level is fine if she also gets an achievement.
MinE
Proabably. P.s I wonder how many upgrades it’s possible to get to that b/c a Seeker of Truth (XX) would be getting ridiculous.
Derek Walker
So something like Seeker of Truth (V) still a rarity 10 but with better rewards ?
MinE
I think rarity 10 is kinda an infinite thing. I mean the boost between rarity 10s likely vary more than the difference between rarity 1 and 9.
William Waggoner
In regards to using the “dimensional” version vs a “space” version. Space encompasses a lot but to a more relatively “primitive” scientific society the “Dimensional” version would be seen as a much narrower field of information wouldn’t you think? I mean we know that the whole “dimensional” aspect of it would require the majority of what would be contained in the “space” aspect. Including gravity and time. The society that Alice is in may have no idea what it could possibly require and going the “dimensional” route would seem simpler in comparison to something so vast as “space”.
Derek Walker
I wonder if she will get an achievement for this. Is 10 the maximum of rarity because it seems like seeker of truth should upgrade from this? And I wonder if this counts as a successful experiment since she ultimately learned why forming class seeds like this would fail
Drake_Azathoth
Other people are like 'That sounds really dangerous' and the System nods and approves. Kek, that makes Survivor kind of an interesting class to level, as you can do it by doing 'stupid' things.
MindWright
Otherwise, good call on the rewrites and good chapter.
MindWright
I dislike the binary easter egg. For me, it breaks verisimilitude because I immediately recognize ASCII encoding and for a layer of this system to be using that encoding method seems out of place. Reading it is annoyingly slow, or requires software assistance, which isn't readily available from my phone. Why isn't the system using its inherent translating ability? If a core violation is so low level it cannot access that feature, then the semiotic nature of the message should reveal something about its origins. Either the original language of its creators or some internal symbolic encoding method.
Eternaly_Lost
This chapter seems to imply that all immortals are not immortals because they reached a high enough level, but because enough people think that they are like an immortal in some area. Which causes them to gain the immortal achievement. I could see how people could be confused that being an immortal came with your level, if you need to be powerful enough that enough people think you should be an immortal, even if they think such subconsciously. It doubtful that someone of a low level could make enough people think such.
Midnight Harbinger
The Error code (Faulty magic seed detected. Magic seed has been assessed to override free will of a human being. Error! Magic seed is a Class! Fixing errors... success!)
Bryan D
Or the explode-if-caught is a perk of their spy-boss. Similar to forcing a slave to work- ‘No Lost Secrets’ type perk.
Enrico Snipes
With the reworked chapters, it made me think that perhaps the spies had some perk that disguised their class by using raw class mana, but due to the recent bugs in the system, this raw mana overpowered their personality, forcing them to act as their disguise class. Like Boris trying to farm.
Adleiavde
You added it a paragraph too early in your text if that helps.
Mike G.
Or just rot13 - nothing wrong with the classics :)
rhekke
Agree with the above 100% Rough drafts exist for a reason.
Abborre
It might make the Perks from a dimensional magic Class more... offensive.
MikeL
Would that be a rarity 10 achievement.
MinE
I think it’s more because they have no idea what they’re doing. I mean they don’t even have a concept of spacetime and they’re essentially ripping holes into other dimensions. The bad pr probably makes it worse, but I doubt the people before the original dimensional disaster thought it was dangerous at least not to the degree that would cause it. P.s I have no idea why they decided to use dimensional mana instead of space mana.
RuRo
Pro tip for lazy people, the binary error code in this chapter is "Faulty magic seed detected. Magic seed has been assessed to override free will of a human being. Error! Magic seed is a Class! Fixing errors... success!". Pro tip for the author: use base64 or hex to encode Easter egg messages. Binary is way too long. 😁
acaswell
Fair point. Fixed!
puppy0cam
sometimes you fuck something up. the important part is that you didn't let it sit and stew generating even further problems the longer you left it.
Glass Glade
Hmm. Is dimensional magic more dangerous because people perceive it as dangerous?
MikeL
You should add where chapter 117 starts. I am going to reread the last chapters instead of the notes and couldn’t tell by skimming where it starts. Thanks
puppy0cam
one of these days the system is either going to get sick of her shit and eliminate her, or it is going to give her an official status as "system bug tester"
Pro tips for people who don't know, you can translate the binary code to text easily with an online translator
acaswell
Oh yeah, I meant to point out Survivor levels XD. Interestingly enough, Survivor doesn't care about the survival of the mind, so long as the physical body remains intact. Alice, however, has gained Survivor levels at rather... unusual intervals. I believe with this chapter people can figure out why Alice got Survivor levels at seemingly random times in the past, like, 60 chapters or something. XD I might mention it next chapter anyway. It's a fun little bit of worldbuilding :D
Anthony Goh
I think from level 74 to 75 is reasonable, due to the level penalty, but I am thinking for survivor to increase from level 54 to 55 seems a bit low, even though its safe as her personality nearly got wiped out.
acaswell
Maybe? Idk. I feel like it's really not ideal that the situation came to this in the first place, but every time I think about chapter 115 and 116 I just feel really unhappy with them. They felt like they impacted the quality of the story, and I felt stressed out and frustrated whenever I thought about them. I was kind of out of it last week and the week before last when I was writing chapters, and I wanted to stamp on the issues from those two weeks before they created a larger flaw in the story that I had a harder time fixing. This way is painful, since I hate editing chapters that are already available for reading, but I think it's the best path forward, even if it's far from ideal. As for 1 level seeming low, remember that she also hit another multiple of 25, so another levelling speed penalty is now in effect starting from the transition between Level 75 and 76. Every one of those levelling penalties is meant to be noticeable and to hurt, especially this one, since it's the biggest hurdle between most people and Immortality.
MinE
P.S Your being to hard on yourself.
MinE
I would complain that 1 level seems little, but honestly Alice is lucky the system didn't have to remove her class.
