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Chapter 55: To Steal a Pearl (2) - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2023-01-27 04:50:44 +0000 UTC

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acaswell

Hmm. That's fair; I'll take a look at the first mention of a black pearl forming and see if there's a way to make that clearer. People screaming will also be fixed XD.

The Lost Pages

Thanks for the chapter!

Arkeus

A couple things. It wasn't clear at all the pearl was a naturally occurring creation every days or so (and they got incredibly lucky on timing) rather than just part of huge kraken hoard previously. also half the fight have people screaming underwater.

Arkeus

I don't think she cares about those as much as keeping the village safe

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Also, while under water: 'I took a deep breath'

MinE

Hope she can get healed. If she doesn’t get a lot of achievements from this, I think she’ll scream.

Guthan

The pearl would probably be amazing to fuse with if the MC had a few extra tiers of willpower.


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