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Chapter 185: Time’s Worn Tracks - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2023-12-14 06:58:13 +0000 UTC

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Aria

Sallia's right about the family situation, Miria seems rather naive about it, though given she's had good families so far its a little understable if a little frustrating. I feel like if she doesn't manage to shift her views about trying to care for family that doesn't care (or care enough) about her, then she's going to be pretty vulnerable if she ever ends up in a more directly abusive family in the future (not that neglect itself isn't hugely harmful to a child, even if they are transmigrators). People who actively commit abuse often love to pull in fake apologies and promises to improve to appease those they've hurt, and current Miria seems like she'd be very vulnerable to that kind of thing. As Sallia has said there are people who would take advantage of her kindness and use it to repeatedly hurt her (the situation with her current mother at least doesn't seem like intentional harm, but in some ways that makes it worse since it can give false hope that things can be fixed).

Arkeus

There is a global +60 to mental that's just shown at the top

Dax

Many of Miria's stat grades are incorrect. You have things listed at grades 10 andf 11, which would be 200 and 220 totals respectively but the actual stat is far below that. Others are wrong too. Grade 8 when it should be 5, etc. You say Salia creater her 5th rune but then describe her creating her fourth.

MinE

Great Chapter as always. P.s The status screen looks like the lines got shuffled.


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