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Chapter 32: Rubble and Ruin - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2022-12-08 00:52:22 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Really need to figure out how to build better fortifications. Ditches, a moat, etc. And possibly create underground defensible shelters. Just a bit more time would make them safe from Land beasts as they can only prey on humans for a limited time before suiciding.

acaswell

I wanted to make each world feel complete, as if it was really a full story of its own. I read a couple of other serial transmigration stories, but some of them just felt like each individual world was more shallow that I wanted it to be, making it hard to invest myself fully in the novel. I'm glad this story feels like it's working on both ends - managing the double layers of the story can feel a little weird on my end sometimes, but I do really want to make it work out properly. XD

acaswell

Many of the villagers did, but not 'most' of the village. Though I suppose that does imply that Miria shouldn't be able to count them, something I did overlook this chapter. Somehow they seem to have teleported back into the village to help clear out rubble. Oops XD. I'll fix that with tomorrow's chapter.

Arkeus

Huh, I had distinctly remembered most of the village evacuating before the meeting....

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Really enjoying your story. Interesting how you've made it 2 layers (the Market and whatever world they're incarnated on at the moment); it feels like just this first world could be it's own novel:-)


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