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Chapter 22: Time and Growth - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2022-11-25 23:19:56 +0000 UTC

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Nathan Sto

As far as swordsmanship goes, you might want to look into fencing. The idea is that an extremely fast, deep stab will kill someone better than a slash. More importantly for this, it’s extremely mobile. Also, while you’re right that blocking a pseudo-liquid like fireballs typically are is pointless, making it lose cohesion would be just as good. I could see a wind mage being the anti-artillery equivalent, since a short burst of concentrated force would turn the fireball from a water balloon to a spattering of rain.

Arkeus

I'm very confused at the pace of rune improvement given Felix and Miria took the same amount of time to get the first rune, then Felix only had a month to wait and another for second rune, while Miria had... Six months to wait and ?? To make the rune? It feels very strange. Also the timeskip went from 'two months' to 'a year' without showing any time had passed between the two, and that was weird too.

acaswell

I generally do read comments for the stories, especially in Patreon where I'm most rigorious about checking through stuff. There just tends to be a noticeable delay between a comment being made and me reading it, since I only log on to Patreon when I'm adding a new chapter to a story. That means that when I was writing Budding Scientist, I tended to 'lag' behind comments by about a week XD. I'll double check the grammar of this chapter and fix the Felix and I chunks. Thank you for the notification.

Ravennittes

Thanks for the chapter. Not sure if you'll read this, but there were a couple of times in this chapter when you wrote "Felix and I's" when it should be "Felix and my". The easy way to remember is that if you take out the 'Felix and' part, the sentence still needs to work with 'I' or 'my'. If it sounds off/wrong with one, try the other. Hope this helps!

Luboš Hemala

Thank you for the chapter :-)


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