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Chapter 1: A Death in London - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2022-10-25 00:23:36 +0000 UTC

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puppy0cam

Well it's nice that we actually get to know what happened with our main lead back on Earth in this one. Alice is probably a missing person or presumed dead but I imagine that since there was collateral damage in her transfer (indicated by le wall from down the street) scientists are swarming over it.

Diego Rossi

Thanks for this new tale. It will be different from Budding scientist, but, based on your synopsis, there will be plenty of argument that I like. I have a lot of hopes for this story.

acaswell

Budding Scientist has always been in third person, but I sometimes display Alice's thoughts in the story. These thoughts are displayed in first person. In the early parts of the story we spend more time alone with Alice, without other characters, so she 'thinks' to herself more often, while later in the story she tends to talk with people instead, thus reducing time spent with Alice's thoughts in first person.

Luboš Hemala

Interesting start of the story. You mentioned that Budding Scientist is in 3rd person, which made me wonder, wasn't it 1st person in the beginning?

acaswell

Until I chew through the initial batch of chapters, there will be one release a day, possibly excluding weekends and including an unpredictable hiccup in release schedule around chapter 21, when I will start putting the story in public areas too. (Hopefully the cover art and whatnot will be ready, but if things get delayed, I don't want my chapter release numbers for public vs. Patreon to get messed up, but hopefully it'll work out schedule wise).

acaswell

Nothing wrong with liking Budding Scientist more. Both of my stories are very different in the 'style' underlying them, and I wanted to write something a bit different for my second story. I'm glad you still enjoyed it, even if this one is a bit less up your alley :)

acaswell

To be honest, I sympathize with that idea. I also prefer to wait until a story has a certain number of chapters/pages/whatever before I start reading it too. Chapters for this story will come out pretty fast, until I chew through my initial release batch. It's a pretty hefty amount. :)

Borindak

Sounds like an interesting story. Thanks for sharing! I will likely wait until there is more of it out before giving it a go, but that is just personal preference as I like having a bigger chunk to initially sink my teeth into when starting new series.

MinE

P.S Fucking reckless teenagers; seriously the world would be better off without them.

Rayl

I've loved budding scientist, and I'm sure I'll enjoy this. I don't feel like the soul ocean part was too long, either. My only complaint is that I now want more.

MinE

I prefer Budding Scientist, but this is a great story too.

acaswell

It's pretty different from Budding Scientist, and I was kind of nervous about this chapter, because a lot of it is MC drifting through the void. I'm glad you liked it :) I've been working on the story for a while, and I'm hoping people enjoy this one too.

SaltyVigilante

I am intrigued....


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