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Chapter 91 - A Budding Scientist in a Fantasy World

🕑 Added 2022-10-01 06:22:03 +0000 UTC

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Honestly, i do not think you did bad with the chapter. The way to release these kind of things is imo, to take a week 'off' and release a double chapter? Its what i meant with: 'if this was a book'. In a book, you read the chapter and then go right to the next, and the next, and next (binge reading experience ^^). So, i got a bit of a bad feeling towards the chapter, even when the chapter was good (and probably needed), simply because i expected something so different from what i got. So pls, dont get me wrong. The chapter was good - it was me who expected something different - and since i had to wait a nother week... well, you get the gist. :)

acaswell

That does make sense. It's a bit hard to compare the needs of a regular book versus a webnovel sometimes, because while the two share a lot of similarities they're also very different storytelling formats. I do my best to follow what I think Alice would do and what the story needs, but that does sometimes mean I need to take the foot off the gas petal in a way that might seem counterintuitive, and I also might mess up that balance. I do my best XD. I do think this chapter is needed for Alice though, since she has spent most of the story shying away from really putting herself in harm's way and avoiding the spotlight wherever possible. Which is why I made her thoughts into a chapter - at least to me, it feels like she's shaking off a lot of her mindset for most of the story up till now and transitioning into the mindset she needs for the next chunks of the story, and since she has clung pretty persistently to her thoughts about violence, avoiding potential danger, and so on for much of the story it felt like she needed some serious thinking to change her ways. But reading this comment, I do wonder if maybe I should have rearranged chapter order a bit and put it in a better spot... Something to think in order to improve my skill as a writer in the future, I suppose.

acaswell

It has a MASSIVE cooldown time, and at this point Alice doesn't feel that a low level Perk matters too much anyway, so she would rather keep the opportunity around for something more useful. Though earlier on in the story she did think about doing so frequently, but at the time her financial situation was also weaker and she had a lot of other things vying for her attention, and couldn't figure out which Perk too priority to replace.

Luboš Hemala

Is it just me, or do you also reread a chapter midweek and finding it more enjoyable? :-)

Luboš Hemala

fix: while still allowing he to help -> while still allowing her to help fix: But now, things were changed. -> But now, things have changed.

bob barker

self-perception can be a giant delusion. I remember thinking that I was fat when I had 1/2" fat pinch on the fattest part of my butt, and veins running down my 8 pack of abs.

Paerofar

This is an important moment for Alice, embracing the need for violence against the Society

bob barker

my vague recollection tells me that she already got that seed

MinE

That can only be done every few years. P.s we have no idea if she needs to wait a couple of years due to not being attached to the system as long.

Rickard Gustavsson

I think it could only be safely done to the first perk of any class without serious and potentially permanent consequences, might be remembering that wrong but.. there was a reason it was rarely done anyways, I think the perk that could sense if things were edible might be turned into a useful sensory/analytical perk if combined with the right perk.

deus vult

nah, she has lots of perks to up the quality of seeds. she can probably get hers to 100% with some work, and she doesn't really need much more than that.

Diego Rossi

Thanks for the chapter.

Diego Rossi

I share your hurt.

D

A whole chapter on self reflection? Hm, i guess those can be useful sometimes. It just... i dont know, id expect more action after a kidnapping? I guess if i read this story as a book, it woudt be so bad, but with the week delay, i cant help resenting this chapter. XD

BeepBoop

"sacrifice these two Perks, because neither of them offered her anything particularly useful anymore" Is there a reason she hasn't tried to replace her old, 'stuck in the woods' perks? I seem to remember the church offers such services. Does it cost an arm and a leg?

Luboš Hemala

I expected Alice to act little bit more calmly and decisively somehow, especially after the first encounter in the woods. This is good as well, finally will Alice play a more active role against The Society.

Luboš Hemala

Thank you for the chapter

Will C

Nooooooo that cliff hurts even more than usual. Also the whole no talent for fighting doesn't really ring true anymore, she may not like fighting but considering her lack of combat classes and perks etc she seems to hold her just fine.

Arkeus

I distinctly remember Alice thinking she needed another seed, either for bio being effective or something else. Did I dream that?


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