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Chapter 76 - A Budding Scientist in a Fantasy World

🕑 Added 2022-06-18 05:15:18 +0000 UTC

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acaswell

Basic Monster Biology isn't a Skill, interestingly enough. There are some specific worldbuilding quirks related to that which Alice will probably eventually discover, although I might not get to that specific sidenote because it would require a (likely kind of boring) discussion of some things I can't directly mention in this comment for fear of spoiling a few things I don't want to spoil yet... As for Skills, in general they are a bit harder to raise than a fair number of other things. Except for Language Skills, which are treated VERY differently by the system (Language skills are capped at 100 and no other skill in the System has a cap, after all). As for the second major chunk of your comment... I have no comment XD. That's about future content in the story, after all. I'm curious, from an outside perspective, has my writing improved over the course of writing the story? I always hope I'm getting better at keeping track of things, writing the story, and making things interesting and balancing story aspects. I never quite know if my growth is just me hoping I'm getting better, though XD. Part of the reason I started putting the story in public was because I know that if I have pressure to keep writing the next chapter, I'm more likely to work on it in a timely fashion and to revise and improve my writing skills. Anyway, thanks for reading :).

acaswell

I believe I mentioned this way earlier in the story, but I don't intend to take away Alice's agency as a character in this story. This is one of the only things I'm willing to break my personal rules about never spoiling the story over. I personally just don't find that to be a compelling way to write a novel, because it tends to irritate me a lot as a reader when I come across it. A story should be about a character using their agency and their abilities to strive towards a goal they find valuable, at least in my opinion. That being said, things are definitely coming to the 'main focus' of the second arc, now that I've finished setting everything up...

acaswell

That's a reassuring statement, in a sense. Time skips are always a little stressful for me because I always feel like SURELY I'm missing something and I need to double, triple, and quadruple check everything to make sure I'm not leaving out some XP for Alice reading books or something. It's a strangely nerve-wracking experience.

acaswell

You right. It should be {Researcher's Speed}. I change the name of Perks and locations around a lot before the final version of a chapter gets posted, because I suck at names, and in an earlier draft of the chapter it was called {Devoted Researcher} before I decided that name was terrible. Thanks for catching it XD.

acaswell

Degraded Magic seed states it can never be influenced by other PERKS and that it can't be combined with other Perks. Since this is an Achievement, it's fair game.

acaswell

Magic seeds TEND to form seeds at about the limit of the conversion ratio, which, in a vacuum, tends to be about 100%. She formed an electromagnetic seed at 5%, and since her new Perk works additively instead of multiplying her 5% by 1.10 (to get 5.5%) she now has a 15% conversion ratio.

MinE

In hindsight, I regret joking about this. They are going to have a field day when they find out about her unique or at least ridiculously rare abilities. Forced Power Leveling is a disturbing prospect and unfortunately likely. The society of starry eyes definitely has a few "easy" ways to grant "useful" achievements.

MinE

I finished rereading the story, and I have a few thoughts. It is impressive how far you have come Alice really needs to work on her skills. Especially Academic and Magic skills. More Languages would help her read research from different countries; I'm not sure how popular translators are since getting a new language skill to functional levels seems easier than translating a book than making a copy. Math b/c Math is essential and seeing Intermediate Math stuck at level 78 hurts. Biology b/c it relates to her research and organic mana seed. By the way, did she ever get basic monster biology? Magic skills either increase her general magic abilities, or directly replicate some of the system's abilities, or both. Seed formation and Mana Filtering are promising. The system is likely going to try and increase the stability of its "blessings". Immortals look like they would instantly go insane or die if the system didn't keep their brains stable. I believe the system would focus on boosting natural stat growth using mana rather than altering them directly with mana. Alice not only gains stats and levels easier, she is more resistant to mana exhaustion.

MinE

Test Subject is debatable, given her habit of self experimentation.

Will C

I'm getting the same bad feeling as Alice. Hopefully she avoids becoming a Slave and/or Test Subject as neither are classes she really needs.

D

You shoudnt avoid time skips just because they are trouble some. After all, you have patreons that can figure out if you missed something, effectively working as prof readers. Not to say you NEED more time skips, but saying that you can use the tools you have without much worry because there are people who have your back. :) Cheers and thx for the chapter.

Diego Rossi

I really like your work. It is a very interesting tale of exploring magic.

Diego Rossi

Note – you cannot break the magic seeds others without their consent. -> Note – you cannot break other people magic seeds without their consent. The phrase seems to flow better if you rewrite it that way.

Joseph

Researcher’s Speed Requirements: Scientist level 40 or greater When you are working on an experiment, the pace at which you think, process information, and work will increase by a significant amount, allowing you to conduct experiments notably faster than before. There wasn’t much to say about {Devoted Researcher} --- At the top you call it Researcher’s Speed at the bottom Devoted Researcher

MinE

Technically she never saw the conversion ratio, so she could just realize it later. Plus it is an achievement

Abborre

Good luck with the summer heat! On that note the Degraded Magic Seed Perk states that it can never be improved by Perks and stuff. But you can just go back and change that without any problem

MinE

Your doing great, Time skips are hard for everyone in my experience.

MinE

I wonder why her non system based seed is still limited in conversion ratio. Unless she is either wrong about it being 15%, she never looked at her status, or she happened to form it at exactly 5% then it was boosted to 10%. Magic seeds seem to be limited by the capacity of the Mana core. I wonder if someone unconnected to the system could create two 50% seeds by themselves or if conversion ratio and number of magic seeds strain the magic core in different ways.


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