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Chapter 63 - A Budding Scientist in a Fantasy World

🕑 Added 2022-03-04 22:45:52 +0000 UTC

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Charlie Jackson

Just finished chapter 16, and read all the remainder of book 1 on kindle. Looking forward to reading the next book!

Faces The Wind

While I still don't know if Alice is american, she seems like an american teenage girl from one of the coasts. Its where she is and is not considerate, where she does and does not feel threatened.

Voral

Damn It would be nice in the future to have a chapter with a POV from Cecilia about some her experiences and thoughts about our main girl, sure she had much screentime but the prospective of that screen time is pretty one-sided for Alice... Great chapter as always, loved the little mention about the Space Race and other history facts, it brought a certain Immersion to the conversation superior to a mere technological talk.

acaswell

Corrected

Will C

I really think she should be less blasé about Cecilia's job offer and also appreciate her a little more as she going to be her only friend in the city and the only person who knows she's an outlander. At the very least I'm surprised they have not consider sharing a place to live.

White Neko Knight

That is a good point.

bob barker

As a reader, I wanted to be reassured that eavesdroppers were considered prior to engaging in that otherworldly conversation

MinE

I think saint=non-criminal class immortals in the Church of the Almighty System.

Pheonixarcher

@MinE oh, that definitely seems like something could just foot the bill on

MinE

System enchant just gives perks rather than doing something

Pheonixarcher

and I have forgotten, what is the difference between a system enchant and the other two kinds, besides the lack of need for power

Pheonixarcher

its my speculation that a "System Enchant" might somehow have its power drawn from the system itself. Or whatever actually manages to power systems on the scale of planets.

I quiet like, that this chapter expanded a bit more on the friendship between Alice and Cecil beyond their research. The memory exchange was nicely done. And now we know why the Raiders began fighting among themselves and also got another glimpse at the strange Immortal and his robot (?) sidekick.

White Neko Knight

Don't get turned into a Saint by the Church Alice! Or into an adviser by nobility. She really doesn't understand that she's moving from the fire into the pan.

Enrico Snipes

Love this chapter. Using the shared memories to show her world is what i thought would be a great use of the perk.


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