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(Unnamed Short Story!) Part 2 Both PoV
🕑 Added 2024-09-26 12:42:09 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
So, I am done in Ontario and will be heading home today, but I have been writing even though I shouldn't be. I honestly have just been following my instincts and what my body wants to do. So here I am, posting another chapter.
Or should I say chapter?
As I wrote this story, I found that the chapter format did not work for it, or some would be incredibly short chapters. This is especially true because you see both POVs without gaps in the story, which I find interesting (for now) to write since it is so different from my usual style.
So I will be posting one part of both PoVs, whether that is long or short.
Anyways, Enjoy!
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PoV. The Devil
The world was amazing, and the woman was caught. Our lips danced for several moments before I ruthlessly broke the kiss, making the goddess groan in frustration. She dipped forward to get another kiss. My heart swelled, and I pushed her back and let my feet fall so I was no longer on my tip-toes. I grinned, turned, and felt amazing, my heart beating a thousand beats a second as I turned around.
My mind was soaring as I thought about what I wanted to do, and my Goddess was in my arms. As it was my first, I had no idea what the perfect woman was thinking or what that kiss was. I had practiced and practiced when I was at home in the throes of my fantasies, and I stepped away and grinned. I tried to open the door but quickly noticed it was locked, and I grinned.
“Maybe I did not need to rip those wings off this Goddess,” I heard myself say, feeling my mind take over on a sort of autopilot. Somehow, it felt like I was watching myself do these things. I grinned at her, and my Goddess blushed hard. My face was hot as hell, and I had no idea where this odd confidence came from.
“You are mine now; follow me, and I will destroy you and take you from the heavens and defile you,” my mouth said for me, and I turned without saying anything else.
“W-Wait,” my goddess said, and I unlocked the door and stepped out of the room without looking back. I walked down the hallway, and my heart was beating even harder, as I did not know if I had just ruined my chances with the perfect woman.
“Where are you going?”
That musical voice hit my ears as I was walking away, but I never even turned, and I heard the door close behind me. I shivered, thinking about the place where I was going to take the perfect being if I could. I never thought I would be able to. I never thought I would even make it this far. Hearing the light steps behind me as she barely made any noise behind me to catch up was amazing.
I felt her shadow over me as she walked beside me into the busier halls, and I smiled. “We are going to the place where I will defile you, Goddess,” I told her, my voice projecting a confidence I did not feel. It took all my being as her perfect, lithe shadow hit me as we walked to not look at the perfection of humanity.
God, I can't believe what I am doing.
How?
It was like I had warped through time, and we were walking out of the school and heading toward the parking lot. I had a tiny little car my parents gave me just a few weeks back for my eighteenth birthday, and I grinned as I turned to her. The car was a two-seater Mazda since I had no friends. My parents mostly got it for me because I was going to an Ivy League school. It was a twenty-ten Mazda, and I moved around to the driver's side, opened the door, and waited.
I did not open the door or the window, and I waited. Moments turned to at least a minute, then to two. I turned on my car to leave, and the passenger door opened, and my goddess sat down in my car.
IN MY CAR!
She was in my car!
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
I cannot believe it
“Buckle up,” I said, my voice flat.
“Where are we going.”
“To defile you,” I replied, putting the car in drive and driving out of the school. My heart was beating in my ears, and I had no idea what to do with myself. My hand reached out and turned on the music, and my goddess tried to say something, but I turned up the music. I couldn't do it while driving. I wanted to pounce on her and do things to her that would ruin her. I wanted her to be mine. I cannot believe she is in my car, willingly following me into the pit.
The Drive continued after exiting the major town area, and farms started to appear. I could tell my goddess was getting annoyed, but I did not care. I drove and drove without acknowledging anything she said.
Then we arrived at my house.
It was a massive farm, and you could see greenhouses for the eye to see. At this time, a moving coop for Chickens was moving around the field, and I dove down our farm road. I drove past the long lines of Greenhouses and moving chicken coops, and I finally turned down the music, letting me hear my beating heart again.
“Where are you taking me?” the personification of God said beside me as I drove to a little shack at the end of the road after passing the farmhouse. “We passed the house?”
I did not stop and pulled up to the little red shack that was all mine. Thick locks were on the door, locking it up, and I turned to the Goddess. “We are here, where your life will change,” I told her with a self-confidence I did not understand.
This was my hideaway, a concession I got from my parents to have a place that they would never intrude on when I entered high school after getting valedictorian. I honestly made it originally to study in a place where I did not have to hear my parents or anything like that.
Then, I met my goddess, and my fantasies started to fly. Thousands and thousands of dollars went into this place as I fed my fantasies, and it became what it is now. I was about to show it to the person my fantasies all targeted. The perfect woman and she was following behind me, waiting to find out what I was about to do next. My heart was in my throat, and I dry swallowed as I pushed the key deeper into the lock and started to open the thick, heavy lock.
With a click that seemed to resound in my ears, my Goddess still did not question me even though I could feel her eyes. Her shadow lovingly draped over me, and I turned as I pulled out the lock. The thick steel chain started to undo. I unlocked the private place that no one other than me had been in for over four years, and I bet my goddess would run once she saw it.
This was the moment of truth.
And I could not stop myself from pulling the door open and stepping aside. The black curtain, to assist in my parents not seeing my shame, blocked my Goddess's view. My mouth suddenly opened, and it was like I was on autopilot. “Enter, and you will never be able to turn back. I will Corrupt you. I will defile you. I will change your life forever, and I will love doing it, " my voice said, and she looked at me.
The goddess's face was blushing a deep red. Her beautiful face looked indecisive, and she looked into the shack. Then, to my surprise, she stepped forward, entering my private domain.
I shivered and followed her in, licking my lips as I heard her gasp.
I closed the door, then locked it.
No one will come for her.
She is mine.
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Pov Goddess
The world was amazing, and I finally caught those devilish lips. Our lips danced forever, and I found myself lost in the pleasure.
Then it was gone, and I could not help but groan in frustration.
I plunged forward to get another kiss. My heart was swelling, and the devil pushed my back and then moved away by no longer standing on her tiptoes. Regret for being tall hit me hard as I wanted to continue to kiss her without needing to lean down. The grin on her face turned evil, shivering in anticipation before she suddenly turned away from me.
My heart dropped, and I did not know why.
Why did she stop?
What was happening to me?
We were melded together!
WHY WAS I FEELING LIKE THIS!?
My mind was all over the place, and I watched as she stepped away from me and turned away to open the door. I had locked it, so It stayed as it was, and I wanted to cry.
WHY WAS SHE LEAVING!?
YOU DEVIL!
YOU BEAST!
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME FEEL THIS WAY?
“Maybe I did not need to rip those wings off this Goddess,” The devil said softly with this voice that sent shivers up and down my spine. She had the confidence, the poise of a tempter, and I felt the need to follow her even as she was leaving me. I was stuck; I had no idea what was happening, and I was lost in the moment, like a fly in a spider's web. I did not want to leave the net.
“You are mine now; follow me, and I will destroy you and take you from the heavens and defile you,” The Devil told me, and I felt my knees weaken and my heart swell. Things got tighter in me, and I could only watch as she turned away.
“W-Wait,” my voice said, unsure of what I wanted.
The Devil unlocked the door and stepped out of the room without sparing me a second glance.
WHY ARE YOU NOT LOOKING AT ME!
I LOOK GOOD RIGHT!
I flinched at the vein thought, but I knew I was beautiful.
But the devil was gone, and I felt lost.
Then I was moving.
I was frozen
But now, now I am moving, and I quickly caught up to her with my much longer legs; I could not help it. I needed to ask, “Where are you going?”
The devil continued to walk away instead of saying anything. It was hard; I wanted to hear what she said. What were we doing? Where were we going? Why wasn't she kissing me? Why did she break the kiss? Where were we going?
WHAT WAS I DOING!?
WHY DO I CARE SO MUCH!?
We just walked into a major hallway, and I could see some other students. And I could not stop my blush when she said, “We are going to the place where I will defile you, Goddess,” The Devil spoke like it was nothing, making me blush. It was full of this tempting confidence that my curiosity could not escape from. What was this devilish girl?
Why am I following her?
She said she was going to defile me?
Why did that sound so exciting?
Why was everything tight?
My heart was skipping a beat like when I was in the championship round of tournaments!
Why am I even more nervous!?
Suddenly, we were in front of a little two-seater Mazda of some origin, and I did not know why.
The devil then pulled out her keys and smiled as she walked around the car and got into the driver's seat.
What was I supposed to do?
What am I doing?
Please, anyone!
TELL ME!
WHY AM I FOLLOWING THIS DEVIL!?
This devil was just sitting there.
Just sitting there!
HOW DARE SHE JUST SIT THERE!
I WANTED TO KISS AGAIN!
That forever moment!
GOD!
Please!
OH GOD!
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!
The car started, and my heart sped up, and I found myself opening the door and getting inside as she was getting ready to leave.
Oh, GOD!
WHY!?
“Buckle up,” The Devil spoke shortly with authority, and I found myself moving before my brain even registered it.
“Where are we going?” I asked, my curiosity reaching new peaks.
“To defile you,” the Devil spoke like it was a matter of fact. It sent shivers down my spine and made me feel tight.
The Devil did not wait and put the car in drive and drove out of the school. My heart was beating in my ears, and I had no idea what to do with myself where we were going. The Devil’s hand reached out and turned on the music, and I quickly turned as I heard Electronic music turn on. It was one of my favorite genres. It was without lyrics, and no one was talking. It was soothing, and I loved the lack of human interaction in the music. “I love this music,” I said, but my heart fell as she turned up the music thoroughly, shutting down any ability to have a conversation. She just continued to drive, and I looked at the cute Devil with Ruby-red eyes beside me. I could not help that my curiosity grew with each passing second.
The Drive continued after exiting the major town area, and farms started to appear. I desperately wanted to talk.
No, I wanted to kiss.
How were those lips so amazing? I felt shivers just thinking about them. The strawberry flavor, the smooth rippled surface, the tongue with agility. Despite my favorite electronic music, I blushed harder and got more annoyed and frustrated every second.
I could not get over the fact of what happened not even thirty minutes ago!
Did it mean nothing to her?
Why did it mean so much to me?
DAMNIT!
Then we arrived at a farm.
To be honest, I could tell that it was a massive farm, and you could see greenhouses for the eye to see. I had no idea what was going on inside them, but then I noticed that a massive building with chickens inside and outside was moving. The cage kept the chickens moving, and it was fascinating. It made the chickens move around and run while keeping them cooped up. For seconds, we drove the chicken coop and the greenhouses.
Then this devil turned off the music, and the thump of my heart in my ears returned.
WHAT WAS HAPPENING TO ME!
Then I saw the farmhouse coming up, and I felt that we reached our destination.
NOW SHE WOULD TALK TO ME!
PLEASE!
LETS KISS FOR HOURS!
God, that would feel amazing!
Then we drove right past it. “Where are you taking me?” I asked as we started to drive by the farmhouse. I looked down the road, and there was only a large but shabby shack at the end of the road. I could not help but ask, “We passed the house?”
The little ruby devil did not stop, though. Instead, she drove up to that shack, and I noticed the Thick locks on the door, locking it up. The Devil parked, and she got out without a word, and I scrambled to follow her. “We are here, where your life will change,” The Devil spoke, and my body shivered at the absolute fact in her voice. This was not a question; it was a matter of time.
Why did that sound so good?
What was this shack doing here?
What were we doing here?
What did she mean by defiling me?
The Devil did not seem to hear my internal pleas. She got out of the car and pulled out the key from her car to start opening the lock on the shack.
This large shack was our destination!?
The Devil did not want to wait, and with a loud click, the thick lock suddenly moved, and the Devil herself started to take off the chains, keeping the door locked, which seemed like overkill. Someone put four screws with a circle on the end and reinforced it with thick steel things, then put the thick chain through it.
But the devil undid the lock in seconds, and I shuddered.
What was inside?
“Enter, and you will never be able to turn back.” The devil promised, ”I will corrupt you. I will defile you. I will change your life forever, and I will love doing it,”
My face heated up, and I knew I was blushing like I had never been before, and I had no idea what to do.
I was so curious!
I wanted to kiss!
Why was she so mean!?
WHY DID I LIKE THIS?!
GOD!
My body moved before I even knew it. I found myself stepping through the threshold into the abyss.
I heard the devil locking the door behind me.
When I stepped past the curtain, I could not contain my gasp.
Comments
Curtis1122
The anticipation!
Patrick G
I still like my idea for the title.
Czelphaghor
Thank you for the chapter. Looking forward to see what's inside the shack
