Madjic
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Galaxy Hunter Online Chapter 75: Stress Reduction
🕑 Added 2024-03-02 12:21:12 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
So I have been working on this chapter for a bit and I wanted to release a double chapter. I really want to hear feedback as this is the first time I did a chapter like this, more or less. I would love to hear what you think and hear any constructive criticism.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NfWksu43hV7bqAmDgy9dg06lyBn8UR4uqdlBDsZO34Y/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
epoeck
It was incredibly hot! Amazing scene
Shamim
Absolutely amazing, I really truly loved everything even the queen name is brilliant π
Da Boss
Very vivid and great. Maybe could have added a bit of the reactions of Queen more as she was being pleased.
Da Boss
Loved every word of it all and was done amazingly well
ReclamerS117
Absolutely loved the scene. Very well doneπ
Madjic
Hey guys, I would REALLY love some Feedback on the scene in this chapter. It is different from what I usually do and I would love some comments on how you thought of the scene. It helps me for writing other scenes in the future if I should adopt this style for a scene or when I am making side chapters or story lines. Thanks!
