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Futanari System Chapter 206: Authority

🕑 Added 2023-06-07 09:05:00 +0000 UTC

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Kenneth Welever

Having realized that I somehow skipped reading chapter 202 which fixes my issues that I raised for the most part I do have to say.... oops... As to this chapter specifically I think it does a very good job of explaining where she sits at the moment. Everything feels like it's leading up to the war arc and this does feel like things are coming to a head. Either hella combat to get her an extra level to buy shit from her system or a power up to boost her to A rank feels closer in the cards now. I do feel that she should be working on her meditation more. Either mobile meditation, extremely fast mana absorption, or simply expanding her tank are things that she should be working towards in the near future. She may have a huge mana pool but when your greatest weapons take 5x the mana to use than other people's trump cards that kinda negates it.

Kenneth Welever

She really needs more personal progress. Even in small ways throughout these months.

Kenneth Welever

So I'm gonna put out my two bits here. I see that you are skipping ahead a lot because all the minutia and micromanaging she has to do wouldn't be very interesting as a story. You've spent chapters explaining her biggest progresses in the military and with this one in particular she's made progress. Chelsea is visibly progressing quickly in everything except personal strength. And that's starting to be a problem. We know that she has a very dense mana pool for B ranked individuals. We also know she hasn't had any breakthroughs. Did her personal training fall by the wayside again? Has she managed to refine her martial arts? Has she made progress with her void magic? We already know she has to practice fighting with a lich who is practically unkillable because her rift magic is supposed to have unusual levels of lethality. She should be able to open a rift, put someone's head through it, then close the rift and have them be auto decapitated. I can understand her not presenting any of these powers publicly so people don't adapt to it.

Madjic

Sorry, it feels like I am asking for feedback every chapter the last couple of days. But I really am needing it lately. I love to hear from you and I think this is another chapter I need to hear as I sat on this one for a bit. Thanks and please enjoy the chapter!


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