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Life Of A Dominant Futanari Week 5 Chapter 188/36: Releasing A Load

🕑 Added 2023-06-06 12:29:32 +0000 UTC

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Rodimus Scoop

Great chapter! A few typos: Jake opened his mouth opened up and saw Tracy looking at him with contempt. I think just removing the second opened or possibly the up as well would work better. This sentence is awkward but I don’t have the skills to clean it up. I think it needs more context or a word or two are missing This moment was much larger than I ever thought, Tracy. Are you wanting to say that it was a bigger moment for Tracy than Angela thought? and Daniel would brought his hand down I think brought should be bring in this context And as Theoritizer mentioned the Tracy’s cock part needs to be reworded. Keep up the great work!

The Theoritizer

"Tracy, and I" -> "Tracy and me," "Sissy's learn" -> "Sissies learn" "Tracy's cock sucked even more of my semen" ??? I don't think that's all of them, but the chapter is still the best! I love heartfelt confessions!

ReclamerS117

Realy loved These two chapters. I think you warten to write Tracys ASS sucked out more of my cum, and Not her cock

Valent

Wow it was everything i expected and more!

Han Pol

I was not quite sure about the last chapter as stand alone, but together with this one it's really good.

Curtis1122

Just as good as the last chapter. I'm glad Jake is gone. And then Tracy's bombshell confession (chef's kiss).

Madjic

Would Love more feedback for this chapter as like the last one. This was a difficult chapter to write and I would love to hear your thoughts. I am glad so many of you enjoyed the last chapter.


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