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Futanari System Chapter 203: Births

🕑 Added 2023-05-20 03:41:06 +0000 UTC

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Kenneth Welever

This is a good chapter length for this subject. That it is separated on its own shows that it is important and that the births matter. Going into too much detail isn't really a good idea. Births are messy. Unless there's something wrong with the birth itself that requires Chelsea to intervene going into too much detail detracts from the rest of the story. (Technically if she were to be really good with rifts and she was careful she could probably rift a kid right out of the womb to make the easiest birth ever. C-section birth - *Phfffft - Teleport them babies out of the belly when its time to give birth.)

Justin "Johnist" Johanson

I love how strong her determination has become. I am concerned that little Marie might be dragging a cock the length of her legs around when she grows up with the way you phrased that.

Madjic

I'm sorry about how short this chapter was. I have deleted the chapter literally 6 times and redone it. I cannot think of a way of doing this without either making the births feel cheaper or needlessly making a chapter for each birth which felt like too much. I have been struggling with this chapter for too long, and this is the best way to go about it. Let me know your thoughts; I would love feedback on this chapter. Most of all I hope you enjoy the chapter!


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