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Futanari System Chapter 202: Last Spar

🕑 Added 2023-05-03 23:24:17 +0000 UTC

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Kenneth Welever

At least you don't have any other characters named Tyler so you can just use a word find/replacement which doesn't take that long. Honestly my typing tends to fumble finger in odd directions if I don't check it leaving all the right letters in a word but scrambled so I feel you there.

Madjic

Taylor, Just a mess up as I work. Usually, I write while I have some inspiration and just put out the words in the messiest form you will ever see, and sometimes little mess-ups like that get through. The problem here is with Tayler and Tyler are both legit names, so it made it through my accident because my editing software didn't pick it up. Honestly, my grammar throughout the years has gotten a little better. So instead of the 700 errors I used to get now I only get 300. Still bad with it though and my Grammarly helps a lot but it doesn't catch everything.

Kenneth Welever

As far as an alternate title goes maybe "Building Squads" You did spend quite a bit of time showing us exactly how the army is building the new recruits into squads.

Kenneth Welever

So is it Taylor or Tyler? Cause you keep using them interchangeably.

Kenneth Welever

It's a good chapter that shows her own growth and progress. Also shows that she is way more lethal than others of her own power level because the void itself is just that, more lethal.

Madjic

Not a Fan of the Chapter name. Would love suggestions if you are interested. Most of all I want you all to enjoy!


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