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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 5 Chapter 174/22: Emotional Control

🕑 Added 2023-05-01 02:35:24 +0000 UTC

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Rodimus Scoop

Great chapter, hopefully Angela starts to learn she can do some damage when she loses control. This chapter might need another edit review, I can’t fully find the paragraphs but there were two that seemed off like they were missing a word or two. There is also a double up of “to class”

Madjic

Thank you, I need feedback like this to, especially with emotionally charged scenes. It makes it easier to rest easy if I am being honest if I get good responses.

fantasy12

I find it good It conveyed very well Angela emotion and her ruthlessness in handling kile

Madjic

This was a hard chapter to write, And even harder with my editing. I personally posted this chapter after fighting with myself for hours. I am not sure if I like the chapter or not. But I felt that if I didn't post today, I would delete it, and it would never see the light of day. This is an important feedback chapter on how you feel about this chapter and what you think of Angela in this chapter. I am very on the fence with it and I might have to come back and do a rare Hard edit of this chapter. Please let me know what you think.


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