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Futanari System Chapter 201: Chelly

🕑 Added 2023-04-20 10:20:32 +0000 UTC

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Kenneth Welever

It's a good chapter. Nice character development and word flow. Patreon isn't set up to red highlight the few grammar/miss-worded/misspelled areas you missed but otherwise it's pretty good.

Madjic

Fixed thanks!

Justin "Johnist" Johanson

'I need a competent assistant' should be 'You need'

Madjic

TWO CHAPTERS IN A NIGHT! Lol, I have been working on this chapter for three days. Tell me what you think, as this was a hard chapter to write. I really want to know what you think and if you have any constructive criticism. Most of all, I want you to enjoy it!


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